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no crew hate d/r etc.
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blade brown....

This kids weaponry is cock..that why his blade is brown
G-unit?..He claims he aint^but ima make him underground
I aint even gotta spit...this herbs sig speaks level's..
He wants to fa shizzle riddles but his whip contain's pedals
runnin order's like coffee run's strait outta headquarter's
His battle experience consists of 8-mile scripts off Jimmy Porter...
makin less sense than quarter's, blade u better life-line a lawyer
Brown's strait anchored below me...It's like he's a Diana Sawyor(news anchor)
Your pathetic...a broad could get paid an still u wouldnt get laid
Face it Blade...switch wit my name...an still ya record would fade

you cant see me man but lots have tried...
this blades brown around your neck like a boxer's tie...
its a easy win but dont make the nuts & bolts come in the say...
how hard could it be dissin a kid who openly addmitted he was gay...
people like to test my gangsta so thats the reason i flash tools...
casonjetx1 stench still remains like the smell of ass on bar stools...
your e-fame rests in a 72-inch hole because i e-ruined it...
carsonjet?he-lame gettin beat by a kid from g-unit...
you'll become home for strays so pick either your chest or grill...
now u a open house due to holes the size of alka-selzter pills....


itz nuffin

Blah.. felt blade's verse better, ..punchers were more wittier..not bad at all..carson had some nice punches,..flowed good..
but i feld Blade's punches better.. vote = Blade

-both elevate.

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kings overview

flow- jet
structure- jet
punches- jet
personals- brown
creativity- tie
multis- ???

vote: carsonjetx2


could u plz drop an honest vote on these ones....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...73&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342

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yo im givin this 1 to carson bc he was better structered and shit...the other dude....u was straight folk.....keep workin and you gonna get it but i felt like a couple of ya lines was played.....
vote-carsonjetwhatever

carson jets verse

This kids weaponry is cock..that why his blade is brown
G-unit?..He claims he aint^but ima make him underground
sorry carson that shit was kind of played right there man.. weak wordplay

I aint even gotta spit...this herbs sig speaks level's..
He wants to fa shizzle riddles but his whip contain's pedals
pretty funny shit man

runnin order's like coffee run's strait outta headquarter's
His battle experience consists of 8-mile scripts off Jimmy Porter...
makin less sense than quarter's, blade u better life-line a lawyer
Brown's strait anchored below me...It's like he's a Diana Sawyor(news anchor)
line was kind of weak dude..

Your pathetic...a broad could get paid an still u wouldnt get laid
Face it Blade...switch wit my name...an still ya record would fade
shit doesnt even really make sense the last line wasnt that good


to be honest i really wasnt feeling this verse at all.. i think carson jet could have come alot harder.. alot of your disses seemed too weak to me dog overall i give that verse a 4/10



blade browns verse

you cant see me man but lots have tried...
this blades brown around your neck like a boxer's tie...
boxers tie.. wtf.. anyways good use of multies but the last diss was like wtf?

its a easy win but dont make the nuts & bolts come in the say...
how hard could it be dissin a kid who openly addmitted he was gay...
lol.. word.. dude said that shit.. nah man lol.. funny as line good shit

people like to test my gangsta so thats the reason i flash tools...
casonjetx1 stench still remains like the smell of ass on bar stools...
line was kind of nasty.. lol.. but still a decent punchline

your e-fame rests in a 72-inch hole because i e-ruined it...
carsonjet?he-lame gettin beat by a kid from g-unit...
you'll become home for strays so pick either your chest or grill...
now u a open house due to holes the size of alka-selzter pills....

overall battle had some ok punchlines shit wasnt that tight though.. i got to give you a 4.75 for that verse


vote: blade took this battle.. carson jet didnt really have any ill punchlines his shit was kind of weak to me.. vote blade brown for his more clever disses

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better punches from carson but there wasnt much reativity or anything that stood out from either verses...i guess this line was ok

makin less sense than quarter's, blade u better life-line a lawyer
Brown's strait anchored below me...It's like he's a Diana Sawyor

can u vote on this plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105549

ohh shit i fucked up in my vote.. i ment to vote for blade brown but voted for carson jet.. im a try to holler at a mod bout this

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wait.....i havent voted on polls yet...so shall i hit up blade even tho i voted for carson???????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????/

yeh jus do that............................................
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