you dont like my shit you can bite my dick/
tight lyricyst whos real wit this feel this kid/
i rep minez bean-town real niggaz get beatdown/
beef wit me aint gonna be three rounds/
weak clowns catch the trey-pound/
spray or get sprayed down quicka than greyhounds/
what the fuck ya gotta say now lay down/
my click dont play around but still servin them junkies/
pump jums bust guns and stay hungry/
slumped some dont trust none when it come ta money/
so you can hate me or love me /
say my flow is shit but neva flush me/
bet that wouldnt likely happen/
yall couldnt touch the kid if you was micheal jackson/

There really wasn't much to this piece, your lines were short, the structure was good but it doesn't seem like you really know where you want to take your writing. I'm not really feelin the style either but keep writtin, you'll get it...

" WHO THE FUCK want drama best get at me"
with stuff like this, you might want to put "want's" instead

Well This Is Basically Garbage And A Waste Of Time But It Wuz Overall Horrible, You Need Major Elevation. You Had Shit Vocab, Structure, And One Hell Of A Horrible Flow.