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Old 01-12-04, 09:29 AM   #1
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A¢ro55 the brook 5kyz, ni¢¢a 5ee between the liez
Bondriez turn up wile I kurrupt all your mindz
¢aught up in a ¢ertin vi5ion, killin iz ma mi55ion
De5try the population an kut it like ¢irkum5ition
Effe¢tive drastik measurees begin ta turn in havok
Faggotz have had it, im di55en em wile i bla5t it
Genetik rapperz blood hiddin deep unda ma fle5h
Homed on the be5t ta put them to a 5pe¢ifik te5t
I reap their korner bowned flowz, pre5hurin more
Ju5tified rapperz to kome on Rap battlez an 5how
Killer attitude ta all theze diffrent krewz, they lo5e
Like a krip that got hiz lip 5plit roken the bluez
Move Befor I hu5h all theze fake ba5terdz
Never fuk with me man, ni¢¢a ima hazord
Otherz 5ee me az a Vetrian, Kuz ima liven legend
Prote5tin deme5tik violen¢e kuz im never forgettin
Qu5tion the fakt that yo bit¢h a55 get 5maked
Re5pon5e ta that iz ni¢¢a u only akt
5trapt intaked, paked an gun maked
Trapt for beliven that
Un-expli¢ed meenin wak
Voi¢ez box ¢hoken an you be 5lippen to fa5t
Wake up an realize5 your vi5ionz never la5t
X-ipit an know that thyz aint a game, Zay my Name
Yaz roken 9Trey 5endin krip bit¢hz on their Way
Zoom in an 5tart the 5pray, an leave yo body dekaid

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Old 01-12-04, 10:17 AM   #2
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first off... whats with the spelling.... quit using 5's n shit.... it dont look good.... making CV look noobish...... but as a piece it was ok... nuthin that stands out.... the syllable count could be revised to give a better flow..... and the vocab could be improved.... not keen on the topic either..... dont mean to be negative... but this wasnt one of your better dropz...aight...pZ.....
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Old 01-12-04, 10:29 AM   #3
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... di55 wazen a ¢V drop but meh iz all good, thanx fo da feed kuz, uppin fo mo
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Old 01-12-04, 11:11 AM   #4
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..I have to agree with 'Dev'..this was a decent piece...but the spelling made it difficult to read..
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Old 01-12-04, 02:14 PM   #5
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iight koo thanx, uppin
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Old 01-12-04, 10:42 PM   #6
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uppin fo feed on thyz yo, hit thyz 5hyt up iz juzz a key i did like too dayz ago an de5ided ta find what people think bout it
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