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In this frustrated drug trip, I mugged the acid drips
For everything they had, I grabbed they’re soul and skipped
I told em to forget reality, oxycotin, acid and shrooms
Throw in some opium, and you've got green and blue moons
Fell into this spiral for desperation and obscure dreams
A bore inbetween the seems of a random girl’s jeans
But amazing inbetween her legs with a pill of ecstasy
Ina swirl of phenomenal colors I can still see my nest is messy
My best guess is this addiction is only a means of escape
Stumbling around this party, I start to notice gleams of rape
This little angel I was friends with, she dangles her heart
Moving in on one of my friends from the start
He was so trashed and wasn't very sharp, he just accepted it
They hooked up to his regret, a detail she neglected to get
I was unable to stop her, I could see the strain on his face
He gained nothing but rape that night, except a faceful of mace
On so many hallucinogens, you may wonder how I saw this
When my friend's self respect is at risk, my mind wont drift
Every time the rift opens up, I throw up any speck of fear
That moment, through all the colors, one was clear
The color of green, shown brightly around those two
The color of green, formed a crown around they’re hue
The color of green, also represented my passion lust
Jealousy towards my suave friend and his one night bust
I've been longing for that girl’s presence, second guessing every sentence
Escaping my love in drugs and repressing the color green in tenements
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105183
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105111
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105131

dope
liked the imagery and shit
nice content and the flow was really smoothe thru out

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I told em to forget reality, oxycotin, acid and shrooms
Throw in some opium, and you've got green and blue moons
Fell into this spiral for desperation and obscure dreams
A bore inbetween the seems of a random girl’s jeans
^nice


shame this is getting slept on..
props

i thought this was good... specially since its from a noob...lol..but no.. this was a good read .. flowed nicely through.. and some good imagery and the scheme was good.. all in all i liked it...pZ..
you dont ned to leave any links no more.....

^ Peepers isnt a newb .. Haha ..

This wasnt a bad piece actually, not the best ive read from you but it was cool. All the drug references were fucked up .. added to the imagery but got kinda pscyhed out as i read it. Content was good, flow was a little ehhh in some area's, but wasnt bad.


dope the way it built up by repeating the first words in each line.

Nice shit Peeps.

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LoL......"newb"

thx fellas, much appreciated

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