this battle was set up before changes and got closed

so here it is again

LM's Verse
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105586

Now I know you've got talent but it's locked in shackles+chains...
So you stand on triple h's shoulders to be on top of the game...
You claim to be a dope rapper when you've lost 19 times...
Haha, dawg your like a fingerless person tryin to write rhymes...
And in the past I've read your lines, your not a cold killa...
And why should we be kautious, 95% of this damn sites iller...
All your words are fillers you got nothin worthy to read...
So even when a n00b drops a verse, you beg and plead...
I even hate your father for plantin his seed and givin us you...
Oh yeah, 1 more thing, when offered a place, I rejected your crew...

EXPLANATIONS
line 2 - triple h/the game : wwe wrestler
line 5 - cold killa : his custom text
line 10 - rejected your crew : ryhme reapers asked me to join but I didnt


Peace+Goodluck!!!!

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

this is my verse

Lm jus throwing his verse out thinking he gonna win,
Let em be known as brett favre…
Slash his mind with words on knives but help for him is what I connive,
Cuz it seems like his played vocabulary is starting to starve…
Their ain’t no land you can hide on and be promised to get by me…
Put this bitch emcee on his knees pleading for no asperity,
Cuz I know this faggit ain’t lying to me, he don’t wanna trying me…
Had to look over my shit for elevation on me but every thing i spit hits you…
Like boxers with blades they cascade through yea sinew,
Betta yet they go through yea pupils so you seeing what’s 4 times better then you…

It’s clearly stated you got a ghost writer he’s posing for your avatar…
Tell the truth, yea lyrics is gay cuz you met the bitch at a dick riders bar…

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

i my honest opion lm gets this one.
breakdown:
Punches: tie
vocab: kaut
metas:lm
flow: lm
my vote is for lm, it was a good battle, kaut, just keep elevatin.

in this battle Lm had metaphors flow and like one more punch so he also had punches kautious had vocab and structure but personaly i think Lm came harder so i gave him the win

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106583

hit up this battle its being slept on

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

yo ite my vote goes to lm.nice punches dawg and personals....flow was abit streched but nice.

kautious you didnt come wak but u gota cum harder with punches.

close but lm gets it,

plz plz hit this lm http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107085 thx..................pz

yep Lm takes this easily his shit flowed way better and his punches hit alot harder....he had a little less creativity but he used personals nicely....kautious good vocab and creativity but punches and personals are the main category plus i never really hooked into your flow....vote Lm hit this up boys honest vote no hates thanx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106901

p.s. congrats on our battle LM no hate i got the win on yte grl anyway peace...

yo plz repay the favor l


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107085 ......thx.........pz

iight...

LM took this... he had a good flow... some very hard hitting punches... that basically won the battle for him... punches, punches and more punches...

not a bad verse by Kautious... but just didnt match LM's verse...

vote - LM

hit this up plz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107007

thanks...

OUT

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

metaz -lm
punches: lm
flow-lm
strucuture: tie
close battle......but lm barely took it in all da categoriez he won in
lm- good verse..tite punches n flow..good overall
kautious- good verse....tite pucnhes...flow....but lm took dis barely in every category dat he won in....real close battle
propz 2 both
plze return favor

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

I'd say LM took this one pretty easily...

The thing that hurt Kautious tha most was the weak punches...

And freaked out rhyme scheme.

It was very hard to follow and I think really took away from ya punchlines.

I mean, really, there were no personals aside from the avy, which we couldn't even see right off.

A couple of metas, some very mild wordplay...

Really, eh.

LM had good use of personals...
Threw a wrestling meta/wordplay line (love those!)...
And, while he didn't hit real hard, he hit consistently.

So, to me this was a wrap, by LM...

Peace

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