TO ALL NIGGAZ WHO AINT HOT AS S.W.A.T.

"S.W.A.T."


"Laughin-Crits" "Clap-And-Sit"...While Dro Busts Out His "Gat-N-Clip" I'll "Slap-A-Bitch" For Tryn To Put A "Trap-On-This"..S.W.A.T. Set It "Str8" SO Aint No "Pack-N-Shit" Only "Stackin-Bricks"..While "Crackin-Wigs"....Mayne S.W.A.T Just "Cappin-Nigs"....and Yall Think Yall "Stackin-Chips"?...Phonies Ya'll Just "Act-N-Bitch"....S.W.A.T. Gone "Clap-N-Hit"...All Ya'll "Fags-N-Snitch's"..Police Find Ya "Bagged-N-Ditches"...Just For Tryna "Snatch-My-Riches"....Mayne S.W.A.T. "Grasps-N-Clintches"...Guns While Ya Bodies "Magged-Then-Twisted"...."Grabbed-Then-Lifted"....Just For Us To "Laugh-N-Mention"...This Was All Cuz People's "Bad-Decision's"....S.W.A.T. Run This Board Ya'll Janitors So Grab Ya "Rags-N-Dishes"....as S.W.A.T. Starts A "Battlin-Mission"...KILLIN NIGGAZ WITH "BAD-INTENTIONS"...LEAVE'M ALL WITH "BLACKENED-VISION"....AND AINT GON' STOP UNTILL "THATS-FINISHED"//



WUT IT DO FAM??......YALL FEEL ME?...HOLLA ATCHA BOI WIT FEEDBACK...

WUT IT DO FAM??......YALL FEEL ME?...HOLLA ATCHA BOI WIT FEEDBACK...

Structure - 6/10
Flow - 7-10
Multi's - 8/10
Vocab - 7.5/10
Topic - 6/10
Originality - 8.5/10

A decent drop, your structure needs to be changed, and I wasnt really sure what u gettin at wit the topic unless swat is the name of your Crew... I felt some of your multi's were forced, it sounded good but the words didnt go properly with what u were talkin about in some points. Overall I give this a 6.5/10.

Your rhymnigs perfected, just work on better topics and I swear that will help u out alot. A better topic enables you to get deeper into what u rappin about, and u can make it longer, and it can make more sense.

with your structure.. you going

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It should have a consistant pattern like:

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Know what Im sayin?

Just keep droppin and keep elevatin.
Pz.