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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Diverse 5 83.33%
Doze 1 16.67%
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Old 01-13-04, 02:36 PM   #1
Doze
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Doze Vs Diverse

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No D/R votes..
No hate votes..
No crew votes..
All votes explained..

3-0 KO or 1st to 5

Post your verse up in this hour..

I accepted this battle like 20 mins ago..this is not prewritten..

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This boy’s having a feather living from his wilted scriptures,
I’m a clever villain with diverse ways to break into dull losers/
Fuck this cunt, you’re a pussy boy only gaining dick riding victories,
Like dicks you spunk reproduced shit, fuck it ima give you a vasectomy
Diverse you don’t have funk, that’s why we see you type like junk,
You’ve just been busted punk, like wrecked ships I leave you sunk/
You’re a wack package on a poised mission, your just fucking luck,
See, I’m munching on this boys position, dude your crunching up/
Its like this kids a roll over, cause currently hes not even winning,
Bitch I’m an ill mover, don’t you understand your never killing/

UK writers will understand my last bar better…I cant be bothered to explain it…

Peace…
 
Old 01-13-04, 02:58 PM   #2
Diverse
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i got this kid like cingular phones cuz in minutes he'll just roll over
de-construct his entire verse to rubble like my words a bull dozer
but fuck Doze, like his name implies he's got me feeling narcoleptic
couldn't drop a clean verse if you doused your computer w/antiseptic
he has to flat out post that he did not pre-write any of his verse
that way he has an excuse for loss when things turn for the worse
doze accepted my callout in seconds, yes, i could be his claim to fame
basically i'm the equivalent of the tabloids, watch me put his name to shame
his own closer was so confusing that it even caused Doze to strain his brain
just like the rest of his bewildering verse, he can't be bothered to explain
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Old 01-13-04, 03:02 PM   #3
Casualty
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fuck you
 
Old 01-13-04, 03:05 PM   #4
Diverse
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wtf bitch....you polled with no vote and your freeposting, fuck you get outta here...
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Old 01-13-04, 03:23 PM   #5
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uppin for some real votes instead of little bitches talkig and being fuckin annoying
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Old 01-13-04, 03:28 PM   #6
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Old 01-13-04, 03:39 PM   #7
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i can say the same thing with way less words, time and effort...FUCK YOU
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Old 01-13-04, 04:09 PM   #8
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uppin for some votes 1x....
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Old 01-13-04, 04:32 PM   #9
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Casualty whats the point??uppin #1
 
Old 01-13-04, 04:39 PM   #10
Yu Bin SunD
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dose=shit was alrite nice vocab but the punches weren't like hot they were aite but like in this battle they just seemed to scratch diverse

diverse=i liked the bulldozer line ur structure was trashy cause to stretched out but u had better flow and the punches were nice and they keep being more consistent throughout the whole time

and casualty?? let me see u do that 1 more time and i will make sure sometin happens son i'm not playin

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Old 01-13-04, 04:42 PM   #11
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yo diverse took this lmao opener had me rollin like Cingular! lmao...
anyway diverse had harder hittin punches n his shit rhymed....
just to tell u Doze killing and winning doesnt rhyme just cauz it has ing on the end...
sorry kid learn strcuture n rhyme scheme....
my-VOte Diverse....
hit up this battle... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106389
wit honest votes... Pz...
 
Old 01-14-04, 03:13 PM   #12
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uppin this shit as well...honest votes only please...don't let this shit get slept on....
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Old 01-14-04, 03:16 PM   #13
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i was feelin diverse in this one sorry whats his face diverses verse was to my likin
plus you last line?

were in america
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Old 01-14-04, 03:20 PM   #14
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Originality - Diverse.. less played concepts
Punches - Diverse.. flow held the punches together nicely.. harder hittin
Personals - Diverse.. clever name flips
Flow - see Punches ^^

VoTe = Diverse

Ran away wiv this one.. now go vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...203#post1088203

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Old 01-14-04, 03:29 PM   #15
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Diverse ripped this with much harder punches and much better wordplay...

That "cingular" opener was a great start.

Nothing very inventive from Doze's verse.

A decent personal with the "narcoleptic" line...
And maybe the "vasectomy" line...

But aside from that, eh.

Diverse used nice wordplay on the opener, the "clean verse" line, and the "tabloid" one...

Tight punches throughout.

For better punches, wordplay, and good current personals...

Diverse.

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