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Spit within 30 mins.
No hate,crew,d/r & herb votes..


checkin in....

In....check............................
Drop.........1st...as said............

....aight ..

I got a "KILLER INSTINCT" I stay merkin' cats rhymes
an "Ace" I'm "Straight" lurking wit nines hurtin ya minds
close the curtains or blinds this aint a spectator sport
an I'm a "JUDGE" ya shit like the "Dictator of court"
dick your almost a corpse "SLEEPY" and "HOLLOW" laid on ya back
I'm the "ENEMY OF THE STATE" I'm even worst then "Iraq"
I'm a "Gurilla" nigga from that "PLANET of APES"
but yous a "BUM CHUMP" plannin out deep "ANAL RAPES"
so fuck outta hear send whos up next to get merked
do like "RH" for votes an give all ya friends dicks a jerk

yeah ya up....
* the RH line means that I battled Rythmic hints and it aint voted and finished but I got a loss on my record for it ...who know's????? why

..Weak, givin ins of the hopeless..screams is what i expect..
Feedback? no reply & hundred views hows that for neglect..
Be notorious, makin a name for yourself by.. losin to me... ?
..I'll ridicule you, make you re-register & even newer to RB..
You can't match me.. kid i'll split your cranium & brain in two..
So you can think twice about why no one is as lame as you..
By now i've already won, the merk's been set..& ordained ..
..& ask yourself..how by this battery..what name u've gained..
..Have this kid's vision blocked..futile verses vs me?un-needy..
Got u with ur back 'gainst the wall..& hit the wall..
.................................................F aster then city graffiti..

Nice battle..

Wiz Kid.. good structure/flow throughout.. nice punches, altho not very consistant..
Good use of wordplay and metas.. The finishing two bars were pretty weak tho.. not a good way to end it, but a tight verse still..
Straight Ace.. again, good structure/flow.. nice vocab.. punches were creative and witty throughout.. more importantly it was consistantly hitting making for a much better verse overall..

Vote - Straight Ace

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106503

Pretty easy battle to judge...

Ace came with some nice complexity...
Utilized his wordplay.
Punched personally and hard.
And flowed the whole way through.
Real tight, personal opener.

Wiz came ok, utilized metas, flowed ok...
He punched.
But it was all simple and kinda played.
The wordplay on "sleepy hollow"is an example.
Real elementary, not bad, just simple.

And not on Ace's level.

Peace

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ace came better, an his punches hit harder!!!
wiz kid was good, he would probs beat the average peep, but straight ace isnt quite average!!!
an dont type with the caps lock on like that!!


peace

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vote ace.. for the reasons above...

return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107063

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..Ok.. thanks for all the votes..4-0
..Need one more, let's get this over with..
Poll ur vote & ill return the favour.