yo rules you know em

16 or less lines

ai????????????????good

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this is the one were usin idk y it posted three times ..................................

but if its on then you spit first

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Nigga If You Call Out...you Spit First..besides I Gotta Run To My Girlz College And Take Her Some Food...so Drop And Give Me 30- 45 Minutes After You Drop....

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Pussy whipped as a Bitch but aint hittin' it son/
you takin her food ....why you aint givin me none?/

use that excuse to longer his extention/
....my lines really come at you like the 9th demention!!!/

he really got no flow so i left him out to dry/
He couldnt see my rhymes cummin' if they busted in his eye/

He was rusty in his prime,his rhymes busted like a criminal/
cheatin' ass radio pickup words to use/
so i broke that bitch so it couldnt pick up the signal/

coppin his bitch watchin her poppin it wild/
she kept my dick in her mouth...she like jockin my style!!/

rockin' it wild' pussy, sexin' it raw/
man ....i know i got heart i just text you it all!!!/

So.... we almost done lettin' her gag my juice/
but whats better than to send her home BACK TO YOU!!!/

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ok...here you go...


what a typical spitter...he's not AT ALL A THREAT*
throw ya "shots" elsewhere...cuz you ain't got "BALLS" in the "NET"~
APPLAUD WIT THE TEC...9'll leave a FLAW IN YA NECK*
my spits are heavy weight...so if you try to bite, then ya JAWS 'll GET STRETCHED~
weak punches...he didn't even throw my NAME FAR*
jackin off, spittin bout my girl...the only way he CAME HARD~
you can't HOLD ME SON...skillz??you ain't SHOWED ME NONE*
look at ya loosses..and after this you'll still "OWE" me "ONE"~(get it:him=0..me=1)
it'll take a earthquake to even SPLIT-THESE-RHYMES*
cause it's like i divide adolescence into rows of 5..the way i spit a hot 6-TEEN-LINES~(16 LINES)
so don't approach me like "midgets at barbeques"...the STEAKS ARE HIGH*
you's a flake...any acqusations yu MAKE ARE LIES~
damn this a EASY FIGHT...kill him self..i BELIEV HE MIGHT*
i already snatched his heart thru the nut...so i guess WEEZIES RIGHT~(he said...in this line:man ....i know i got heart i just text you it all!!!/ ).....EASY!!!

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Wezzy

Pussy whipped as a Bitch but aint hittin' it son/
you takin her food ....why you aint givin me none?/
Cause he dont know u, why the fuck u want a man from a website to bring u food?
use that excuse to longer his extention/
....my lines really come at you like the 9th demention!!!/
So-So
he really got no flow so i left him out to dry/
He couldnt see my rhymes cummin' if they busted in his eye/
Actually not to bad...
He was rusty in his prime,his rhymes busted like a criminal/
cheatin' ass radio pickup words to use/
Blah...One Word - WACK
so i broke that bitch so it couldnt pick up the signal/
2 Lines...not 1
coppin his bitch watchin her poppin it wild/
she kept my dick in her mouth...she like jockin my style!!/
Right..wack
rockin' it wild' pussy, sexin' it raw/
man ....i know i got heart i just text you it all!!!/
Did you just say that you gave him your heart?
So.... we almost done lettin' her gag my juice/
but whats better than to send her home BACK TO YOU!!!/
Alot of things...that was not a good punch and didnt make sence at all


9

what a typical spitter...he's not AT ALL A THREAT*
throw ya "shots" elsewhere...cuz you ain't got "BALLS" in the "NET"~
Ok Opening
APPLAUD WIT THE TEC...9'll leave a FLAW IN YA NECK*
my spits are heavy weight...so if you try to bite, then ya JAWS 'll GET STRETCHED~
Is it a coincidence that ya bar was stretched when u said that?
weak punches...he didn't even throw my NAME FAR*
jackin off, spittin bout my girl...the only way he CAME HARD~
lol...nice punch
you can't HOLD ME SON...skillz??you ain't SHOWED ME NONE*
look at ya loosses..and after this you'll still "OWE" me "ONE"~(get it:him=0..me=1)
Yup i get it...nice hit
it'll take a earthquake to even SPLIT-THESE-RHYMES*
cause it's like i divide adolescence into rows of 5..the way i spit a hot 6-TEEN-LINES~(16 LINES)
Decent
so don't approach me like "midgets at barbeques"...the STEAKS ARE HIGH*
you's a flake...any acqusations yu MAKE ARE LIES~
So-So
damn this a EASY FIGHT...kill him self..i BELIEV HE MIGHT*
i already snatched his heart thru the nut...so i guess WEEZIES RIGHT~
Good Closer

Overall - 9Dimentions

He came harder and simply had better punches

9 - Challenge some better cats....this was a easy win for you...work on ya punches though and try to keep them consistent. You started off just ok, then in the middle you came much harder, then u died down and then came again wit a good punch at the end. Oh work on ya struct too...dont use capitalz and dont use that ~~~ and ".." around ya punches and metas

Decent verse overall though

Weezy - Work on ya punches...and dont space ya bars

My vote - 9

Uppin^^^^^

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