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Old 01-15-04, 09:14 AM   #1
Rural Thug
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Contract Killers Love

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Expect the unexpected original criminal
Don't blame me when i enter and kill 'em all
I shot 'em all, finished them up and placed them on a plate
No mistake, i cant complain but that was their fate
It was decided, they tried to late, they couldnt fight it
I tried to hide it, but the extermination was complete and while I
Waited in the bleechers to see my target move
I saw you dance and groove while you were jumpin too
The music i create to express my feelins about my crew
How hard it is to live as a quiet criminal genious
But carry on mischeavous, but when you go and leave us
We have to hunt you down like the mungrel you are
I dont wanna kill ya but i have to keep it hardcore
Its all my money for crack and dro'
But my feelins for you are interferin the job thats to be done
My hands shakin as im holdin the gun
Where has this come from, im normally steady with a magnum
What can be done? My life as a member has been finally undone
This cant be happenin, my feelins should not be out
How can this be the reason for my murderin drought

I shout, from the top of my voice
Im gonna lose all my money, the house and the Rolls Royce
Come on boys...i gotta leave
Give me some time and... let me breathe.

If i cant kill for a living, my life is ruined to the extreme
I cant live my life clean and beams, from those murder scenes
I was surviving well, livin my dreams
But when you came It all fell to pieces and burnt at the seams
Why do women make it so complicated and steep
When I speak, lyrics about you fall out and bleep
Like the bleeper in my pocket for my homicides
My eyes never dry, when I pulled and the bullet fly
Towards the target, that target is thy
In todays terms that is you, you’re the bullseyes nigga
And your just another figure placed as a result of my trigga, nigga
No ones bigger than this, no ones smaller than them
But now im the smallest and im afraid I love you again
Once again, hopefully to the end
But no career... im up fuck alley
Im broken, no house, car and money, so I gotta get out


I shout, from the top of my voice
Im gonna lose all my money, the house and the Rolls Royce
Come on boys… i gotta leave
Give me some time and… let me breathe.

Now my life with you is lovin and successful,
Lovin and sexful, got kids and a new car and all
Take my kids to school, pick them up when the fall
I care, iv changed my tone and care for my family
Nowadays, I wouldn’t have a gun coming near to me
Most people are dear to me, if there was a death I would react tearfully
Cos I had a change of heart, I think I was hit by the cupids dart
Don’t make me start, im just gonna live my life as it is
Don’t have a wish, all my hates extinguished
Simply, iv had enough of this…
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Old 01-15-04, 03:36 PM   #2
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This was alright i thought....structure could use a bit of a touch up on a few bars though cause they seemed stretched out but nothing big i guess....you had some alright flow in this i thought, it stayed on pretty much through out it....had some good vocab in this....try adding some more multies though...but keep at it.
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