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Old 01-14-04, 01:21 PM   #1
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The World Is Crazy (random things that would never happen rhyme)

IP: 7A38 2D7B

Rippin like Jack high off a lungful of crack/
Aiming for the front door, got sent round the back/
Paedophiliac, said he fancied a snack/
When he ate a five year olds pussy, in his plan of attack/
She told you it hurt, like a nun up the skirt/
Getting down in a hurse with the vicar of St Andrews Church/
Pope stares on with a camera, a bag of viagra/
Clutched in his hand like Tony Blair propoganda/
The President bought a deal, said he was keepin it real/
Bobbing his head to Hip Hop, doing whatever he feel/
Increasing the skill, like Mother Teresa armed with a weapon to kill/
Sent down to the desert, and still caught a chill/
More pain than a brain tumour, i spit toilet humour/
Wash my mouth out with soap, see the eastsiders riding/
Up in the west coast, swore i saw Tupacs ghost/
Don't wanna boast, but i'll put you in my rap oven/
I'll rhyme, watch you roast.......
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Old 01-14-04, 01:51 PM   #2
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replies? and that Jack line refers to 'Jack the Ripper' a serial killer who raped and murdered a canny few women...just so you know...
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Old 01-14-04, 06:14 PM   #3
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thought this was ok... not as good as the last i read of yours, the scheme seemed a bit more basic on this.... but it wasnt bad... still decent... and the flow was on.. the second half seemed to biuld a bit....oh and why'd ya explain the jack thing.... everyone will know that..lol......pZ
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