iight i dunno what the fuck the rules are on this site so fuck it

holla back who spits first

aight....
30 minutes to drop...
you drop first, ill follow...
....starts from now...

ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation?
IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME,
im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME?
cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting,
ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming.
ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU',
cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.'
i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack,
with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class.
BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS,
ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks!
THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK,
you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK!

holla back

Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines
I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine
So unless their blind… they've made the association
Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation!
God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa
White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure
A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered
Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out
So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi
So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried…

nice shit dev, good battle

holla back wit some votes on this battle!!!

ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation?
^.....not a good opener ...sorry...
IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME,
im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME?
^ok ..played sex lines......meh....diffenet site style...
cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting,
ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming.
^stretched second line....ok meta4
ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU',
cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.'
^good meta4...played but whatever....first line .....blah..
i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack,
with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class.
^again second stretched line.....its fine though.....
BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS,
ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks!
^this is fine don't cap your multis....good metas...ok punches...
THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK,
you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK!
^ok closer....good wordplay....gay jokes....sad....



Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines
I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine
^hehehe nice....feedin can be helpful.....
So unless their blind… they've made the association
Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation!
^this an Ok punch.....
God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa
White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure
^thats a good connection....but an ok punch...
A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered
Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out
^don't ryhme...its a good punch...no wait its only ok
So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi
So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried…
thats a fine closer....consistency is what won this..fo dev..and structure..and veteranness of flow peace.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110989
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Breakdown

ya spits aint shit, wanna hit and start hatin?
i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation?
IM SICKER~THAN~THA~GAME, so you the PICK~OF~THA~LAME,
im startin to wonder whats shorter...YOUR DICK~OR~YA~NAME?
cmon pussy, cmon and push-me swearin an shouting,
ITLL STILL BE OBVIOUS, this battle is like gary colman against yao-ming.
ya shits like a 'LIMP DICK', CUZ EVERYTHIN IS 'HARD~AS~YOU',
cuz you just a 'pussy with beef' like 'lesbian barbeques.'
i aint gunna argue-wit-you, so come back wack,
with an attack of bitch ass battle raps ya sister wrote for you in her math class.
BITCH ILL 'BLAST~THIS-GEEK', havin ya period LASTIN-FOR-WEEKS,
ya HALF ASSED lines aint hard, like unmasculant-cheeks!
THROW A 'PUNCH BACK', like 'quazimoto rhymes', ya HUNCH'S~WACK,
you like the fuckin CHIP AND DALE, the way you MUCH~ON~SACK!

Jimmy, ya verse was ok. Had some ok lines and some nice wordplay.

Its 2004, not 92… yet this kid’s droppin played lines
I wouldn’t mind another time…but half of them are mine
So unless their blind… they've made the association
Good this is only text… and you've got bad pronunciation!
God father in ya sig… don’t make you a playa
White never won the title… So like him you’re a failure
A 147 break I don’t think so… you’re plain snookered
Again its jimmy white that cues… gets a first round knock out
So that last bar don’t rhyme… but you highlight the multi
So we’re even… except JW equals,,, ya Just Worried…

Dev came hard. His lines hit continuously, and his flow was good.


Vote: Dev

Both emcees came hard in this battle. Each emcee had tite verses but Dev gets this one wit his constant punches.

POLL VOTE ON MY BATTLE, RETURN THE FAVOR!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481

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This is how I see it

Flow=Dev, structure made this one for Dev it was a much easier read which made it flow better.

Punches=I'm gona say Dev, his punches just seemed a bit harder to me, but it was somewhat close.

Personals=Dev, they both had a decent amount of personals, it was just the Dev's were a little better again.

Vocab=Dev, he just had a higher level of vocab in his piece.

Over all=Dev, I thought it was close, just seemed like Dev had a little advantage in most of the catagories.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

I forgot to ask for votes on my battle, don't care if I win or lose just want it voted on.
Heres the link.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...anIllabymidnite

i already did.....uppin[2]...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481

POLL VOTE DEV AND JIMMY WHITE

Multi - jimmy white one this category and only this category
Punches - Dev had better punches
Vocab - Dev owned this battle in the vocab department
Worplay -Dev had the better wordplay
Flow - Dev lead this battle in the flow department. Jimmy White keep trying to make words rhyme with multies, he forced multies together

I vote Dev cause he had a more relaxed verse, no line seemed forced, and his punches & flow was better

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