I was feelin this one soo good that i had to cut it short and save some of my ideas cuz im definatley makin this one into a full audio track. A few meta's im sure you cant find em, let me hear feedback after, peace

I wrote it listening to Rap - Instrumentals - Project Pat feat Juvenile - back clap, so for fun DL that and try to flow with it, it goes pretty good.

Theres numerous ways to make your soul raise and body rest
including many stages and phases involving many tests
A glock aimed point blank put up against your chin
try taking only one shot attempting to hit the rim
jaw dislocates and becomes used for fish bait
ill even off the edge using the bottom of ice skates
grab a pen and stab you in the neck with no regret
adams apple cracked open and vocal cord broken without a sweat
punch you in the chest with full force in mind
watch your heart bounce back and break into your spine
collar bone was affected due to the impact given
your unable to walk but still lucky to be livin'
found some old string in my garage i use to tie knots
no! not what your mom and dad did on your uncles yacht
this type is used to inflict severe bruises and burns
tie it around your face till fluids ooze out and squirm
the next one is a personal favourite of mine
it works very well if you have enough time
first grab gasoline and pour it all over your victim
then grab some morphine and stick the needle in him
after minutes pass and he starts to feel limb
tell him his rights then present him with a grin
he will be quite woozy and wont understand much
give him a bible or something for him to clutch
as the gasoline drips and morphine takes control
grab some rope and hang him to a flag pole
now hes gasping for air but can bearly speak
time to light a match and from there you'll hear him shriek
he knows his time is done, thats the fun part!
his body hanging there, its like a peice of art
Take out a nine and make sure you reload
toss the match and shoot the flames as you watch him explode

uppin^

last up before death

no one gives feedback here or what?