Well...I'm working on a track...and I jsut started writing and this came to my head...I think it's pretty dope, going to be an audio. It's me against myself...1 and 2 just stand for the two parts of me.


1- First i'll watch him leave his crib, then walk the street
Watch him walk past, then my clip he'll meet
2- I can see all his moves, predict where he'll land
Only chance I got to live is to devise a counter-plan
1- Which weapon for assault? I can use the quick snipe
or make him suffer and feel the slit of the knife
2- I know he's equipped, has everything that he needs
But so do I possess what is required to succeed
1- I know just how he thinks, where he'll start and stop
If he'll run, or take cover, or fight back and take shots
2- I see what he see's, and My time is his time
His death is my death, my mind is his mind
1- Hidden by the dark of night, have target in sight
Leaning over top of the roof, ready to strike
2- Leaving where I am, I can feel where he is
That's why once I step outside...I decide to do this
1- He disappears, only took one second to blink
can't lose focus on my mission, it allows him to think
2- I've regained control, and now to put it to work
I assemble my weapon, now darkness that I lurk
1- Gotten back focus, but now faced with a decision
Play safe or take the shot when he's not clear in vision
2- i know he trembles, and I know he's panick
Tripping out so much yyou'd think he's estatic
1- I know where he's hiding, just behind that van
But the question I wonder is does he know where I am?
2- He's just behind the sign, in the position of kneel
The trigger is his sniper is what his right hand feels
1- Any sudden movement, can result in my worst
But which one is better...to go second or first?
2- Will first result in my death, or will second be my death?
Would I be better off if I wasn't thinking of death?
1- Fuck what my mind thinks, I must go and strike now
2- Why listen to my mind, I know I gotta strike now
1- I step out, 2- see the bitch, 1- I look steady, 2-Press click
1- Last thing I remember.... 2- Is hearin 2 clips...

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aight for a keystyle..nice flow
lil choppy in places..nice concept though
aight vocab..good piece.....props

I liked this idea, it flowed well, which made it a better read, I thought the idea made this piece what it was, very nice concept, I liked it. Keep doing what your doing.

uppin, thx for the feedback guys. Was just a quick key.

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uppin

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nice flow and concept...
concept would be ill on audio...
just needs ta be expanded a little...
dope as is though...keep spittin...