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01-26-04, 08:32 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Before people get to know me they always wana go me/
take my kindness for weakness, I feel so lonely. The world against me it tempts me immensly/ I resent me, wanting to owe God less fees. Regret my life as it is, don't wana cause more/ said it before now even further from heavens doors. I'm polite, cos I don't like it you think I won't fight?/ slight change in my mood when you spoil my night. I act like that to survive in my habitat/ my mentality, 'nah I'm not having that'. I still feel bad, my future looks dim/ things don't change people, people change things. Live in sin and I could had so much potential/ live mental so alcohol's essential. Nothing to hold onto but a bottle, so dependant/ why I keep living when I just wana end it? Tried to keep a promise to a friend, seemed like an illusion/ a day went past, still using, broke my resolution. I'm sorry didn't even try now it's just a lie/ they keep wanting to help me but can't figure why. I guess they see the best in me that rest/ the softness that gets less present in times of stress. Hope to drink to a seizure, wake up with amnesia/ no memory of this life start again and meet her. |
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..I cansee that you are improving by your piece..although some lines sisn't make any sense..your flow was a little choppy..and vocab was better than your other pieces..you are getting better..~Click Hip Hop Therapy..peace..
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01-26-04, 11:28 AM | #3 | ||||||
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