hey YO

u wanna beef with me? then u better think twice
fucking round with me when u should be fucking vanilla ice
quit while ur ahead, before u end up killed twice
is that a threat or a promise? niether it's good advice

callin' urself 'SmOe Ki' i guess you think that u can 'SmOkE Me'
only thing u smoke is cock and u probly wanna stroke me
unlike you i be straight so don't bother to approach me
u so gay u might as well scream "no dick can choke me!"

so now it's 2 verses down, still 6 lines to go
i got you on the ropes, you aint even got a hope
see my rhymes are dope, while u just cant cope
with the fact i flow better than god talk from the pope

so if u think u can challenge this rap battle master
bring it on ya little bastard coz skorp is gonna smash ya

ok ur turn to spit dawg, it's 14 lines if ya can't count.
no hate votes
no crew votes

ight, no check-in, we jus spittin str8 up.. thaz kool, ima write my shit right now.

ayo...

im cloudin-ya-vizion, like when you stung from a scorpion/
an astoundin-envizion, K.O... results, tha score-3-to-none//1

yall couldnt be considered soldier's, holdin-guns-in-fatigues/
only time your runnin shit is bonin-nuns-in-ya-dreams//2

you're 20 years old, prolly in this shit longer-than-me/
but aint nobody feelin you, ya fans belong-ta-me//3

take ya whack lines back to tha "outback"/
think twice for you call out someone thaz gunna shout-back//4
im not afraid of a challenge, or to blaze-on-this-man/
but he go "down under" on a dood, and graze-on-pubic-land//5

rappin is in my blood, Rb is my backyard/
while you freestyle wit kangos and koalas, tryina ack-hard//6

you gettin sonned like i fucked ya mutha, with no rubba/
came inside her and she bore you and ya twin brotha//7

WEAK SHIT!!! lol

but oh well, it's something. g'luck homie!

PEACE!!!
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Skorpius.. decent flow/structure.. pretty basic vocab used, didn't make anything stand out in particular.. The g.ay shit is played.. virtually useless as a punch..
Some good multies tho..
Smoe Ki came harder really.. better vocab, punches and wordplay throughout..
Again, the multie use was tight.. good end bar rhymes.. the grazin' on public land twist was real nice...
Overall a much better verse...

Vote - Smoe Ki

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106503

1-0 me, thanks for voting homie.

Uppin for votes!

PEACE!!!
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skop, mos def got this, smoke had better vocab, n nice flow, but skop, had metas, punches, personals, an nice flow from beginning to end. my vote if i could would be for skop, smok, keep elevatin. 1ne

yeah that was weak smoe ki

callin' urself 'SmOe Ki' i guess you think that u can 'SmOkE Me'
only thing u smoke is cock and u probly wanna stroke me
unlike you i be straight so don't bother to approach me
u so gay u might as well scream "no dick can choke me!" -uh killer shit right therre!!!

im sorry but smoe ki dude got you in jus about ere thing cuzzo

vote=skopius

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Nice to see you've elevated Smoe Ki, you used to be so fucking whack. You still aren't that great, but you are a lot batter then you were before.

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i cant poll vote but i think smoke got him. to me the gay jokes, at least the way u worded them, are old skopius. they were about even but smoke got him in flow but neither had real good punches. smoke got him over on "rappin is in my blood, Rb is my backyard/ while you freestyle wit kangos and koalas, tryina ack-hard" and the line bout grazing on pubic land. My vote is smoke.

so thaz 2-2... i aint goin by tha polls, cuz thaz whack to make someone have 100 posts before they can vote. everyone with more than 100 doesnt vote lol..

Brethren - do i know you? oh wait, aint chu umm, cancerous? or sumthin like dat? anyway.. whoever you are, you can take tha time to say i elevated, why don't chu throw up a vote too? since you already wasted some time posting in here.

2-2... uppin for votes.

PEACE!!!
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yo Imma say that sm0e ki got this one but...cuz he had better punches and had better personals...
so yea..................other cat has some decent bars.............but lacked creativity..........in a sense...........so vote/smokei for a better verse overall...aight...

gay jokes are gay. lol. dont ever use a gay joke again, they are wack 99% of the time. no exception here. although, i noticed a lack of interesting punches in your opponents verse. smoe ki.. i am voting against you because that seemed a little forced, like it wasnt really directed at him much.


v/ skorpius

3-3... damn, this is a good fuckin battle lol...

uppin fa votes.

PEACE!!!
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