What are herbs, are they weed, ganj, green or fake ‘C’s
Wanna be G’s, on an online spree, try’na be what they think they see
In the mirrors reflection, but in reflection there’s a different vision
A premonition, I got years ago, the internet’s a competition
Thru whatever angle ya living, is it really giving, ya wisdom
NO, its taking time, so why face the elementary heads in them
Though im not a vet, maybe no respect, but dialect’s free-wheeling
Appealing to the experienced that respond with feeling
Without leaving, saying good shit, same replies, got me kneeling
With aching ribs from the regular ad-libs…nice ‘sche’, in-completing
‘Nice verse’ shit, might as well be eating dick, riding, ya fleecing
Why ya greeting, ‘all the best’ ya aint the reaper reaping
Cos the only soul ya eating is from my shoe’s and their healing
Ya get my feeling, plants aint breathing, photosynthesis needs light
These herbs are ‘leav(f)ing’ but not flowering like hermaphrodite
They can fuck themselves, but when the lights turned on
They lose the fight, get shot tonight, deceive and feel the might
Of the ‘straight’ line, ya way below, with ya lyrics confined
To the time before a rhyme was a rhyme, but not philosophy
That’s with an apostrophe, yes! Cos you’re a laugh to me
A catastrophe to veterans, the skilled, me, and to the site RB…….

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This was good piece here i thought...you had good structure in this.....the flow in it was on point through out the piece, seemed to flow pretty good in it....you had some nice vocab i thought through out the piece....had some good multies....overall a good piece...keep at it.

whoa..Nice..even for you..LOL~...this was extremly nice..great wordplay..not a dull moment in the whole rhyme...one question...what are 'herbs???????..LOL~peace..

herbs are the losers who fuck sites up, with thier no talent drool...

that was ppretty hot but ya formats wak you gota seperat the ish other than dat its aight

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I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

i'd say it has tight flow! i was feeling that, i didn't so much like the concept, i would have made it a bit longer, but over all it was good.

P.s. i would like some feed back on my "freestyle diss" on this board.
thanks

this was jus a quick key... but it rings true