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Check in by: 09-08-04 at 12:21 AM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:22 AM.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:38 AM.

now when i win this shit i plan to get my money upfront
the tech wet ya lips like ya fcae was part of a cunt
roll ya body up in a black bag leave u smoking like a blunt
lyrics put a bump on ya face like an std lump
u the type that be praying to get raped by a priest
the rhino tips leave ya head on the ground like an anti-freeze leak
u prewrite ya shit that's why u put the drop time for "almost-a-week"
ya lyrics tire me boy i'm "falling-asleep"
lyrics dig down deep into ya nervous system
strike a few vital arteries then ya nerves start twitching
i got niggas giving me thumbs up on this battle like a hitch hiker hitching
u from philly then u know how them "guns-bust"
snap my finger like a wizard lyrics lay u out with "one-touch"
u beating me it ain't happening soon
leave footprints on ya face like i walked on the moon
i need a girl like p.diddy so u gonna be my bitch like loon
get off tupac's dick u never saw him on your's
ya rhymes get very little business like a corner store
u was born whore so why u trying to be a man
i kill u upfront then go on to killing b.a.m
leave ya head in bag like dope with kilograms
have ya girl in my bed saying "oh boy" like Killa cam
cross my path i'll let the heater spray in all directions
bitch u couldn't come harder even if u had an erection

iight less get this ova wit,

ayo ....two sets one f0o ya
end ya career that neva started like tha great hova/
talkin bout rollin thru wit gats lemme find muh range rova/
runnin up da score jus quit da games ova/
put da clip to ya mellon i aint gay but ill still blow ya/

games done it was from da beginnin/
u act like u had a chance nigga im grinnin/
i see right thru ya shit like loose linnen/
lyrical masta mind preachin rhymes like religion/

afraid ta sho ya record cuz ill make a nigga cry/
oops muh bad shotya in ya chess made ya shirt tie dye/
slice ya neck make ya talk....can u say bye bye/(hah)
naw ima sneak up on ya and skid out wit a drive by/
or snipe y0o ass from a jet sumthin like a fly by/
da F B I found ya but i got da gov whipped s0o they lemme slide by/

lyrically ill wit shit that spits like venom/
thas da F B I i told u i had em whipped nigga i sent em/

now im off and runnin from da kid wit aids/
twist a livin legend legs start ta looks like braids /
run game on ya grl like im dishin out plays/
get m0o head than a koofie g0 hide away/
odds of u winnin dis battle keeps niggas in dismay/
thas like sayin a jews gunna celebrate the christmas holiday/

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Voted For: upfront

nice flow and punches from both sides

dis an great verse upfront from u since.............. um eva lol

legends

now when i win this shit i plan to get my money upfront
the tech wet ya lips like ya fcae was part of a cunt
roll ya body up in a black bag leave u smoking like a blunt
lyrics put a bump on ya face like an std lump// nice punch

u the type that be praying to get raped by a priest
the rhino tips leave ya head on the ground like an anti-freeze leak
u prewrite ya shit that's why u put the drop time for "almost-a-week"
ya lyrics tire me boy i'm "falling-asleep"
lyrics dig down deep into ya nervous system// true true punches and personals

strike a few vital arteries then ya nerves start twitching
i got niggas giving me thumbs up on this battle like a hitch hiker hitching
u from philly then u know how them "guns-bust"
snap my finger like a wizard lyrics lay u out with "one-touch"// ha ha ha talkin about yo peoples upfront

u beating me it ain't happening soon
leave footprints on ya face like i walked on the moon
i need a girl like p.diddy so u gonna be my bitch like loon// ehhhhh not good

get off tupac's dick u never saw him on your's
ya rhymes get very little business like a corner store// um u gettin weak

u was born whore so why u trying to be a man
i kill u upfront then go on to killing b.a.m
leave ya head in bag like dope with kilograms
have ya girl in my bed saying "oh boy" like Killa cam// ehhh punches were weak

cross my path i'll let the heater spray in all directions
bitch u couldn't come harder even if u had an erection// nope not good closa

8/10

upfront

ayo ....two sets one f0o ya
end ya career that neva started like tha great hova/
talkin bout rollin thru wit gats lemme find muh range rova/
runnin up da score jus quit da games ova/
put da clip to ya mellon i aint gay but ill still blow ya/ HA HA HA PUNCH NICE

games done it was from da beginnin/
u act like u had a chance nigga im grinnin/
i see right thru ya shit like loose linnen/
lyrical masta mind preachin rhymes like religion/ DAYUM KO!!!

afraid ta sho ya record cuz ill make a nigga cry/
oops muh bad shotya in ya chess made ya shirt tie dye/
slice ya neck make ya talk....can u say bye bye/(hah)
naw ima sneak up on ya and skid out wit a drive by/
or snipe y0o ass from a jet sumthin like a fly by/
da F B I found ya but i got da gov whipped s0o they lemme slide by/ ITS AN AIGHT PUNCH

now im off and runnin from da kid wit aids/
twist a livin legend legs start ta looks like braids /
run game on ya grl like im dishin out plays/
get m0o head than a koofie g0 hide away/
odds of u winnin dis battle keeps niggas in dismay/
thas like sayin a jews gunna celebrate the christmas holiday/ DARE I SAY IT KO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HMMMMMMM LIVIN LEGEND U WERE GOOD NICE VERSE MAYNE FO SHO NO BEEF

UPFRONT KEEP AT IT CAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE U ELEVATIN (NOT J/P)

UPFRONT GOT MY VOTES CAUSE OF DECENT PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS FROM BEGINNING TO DA END

LIVIN U WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES BUT U WENT FROM GOOD TO BAD TO WORSE

BUT KEEP AT IT

KEEP WRITTING
KEEP SPITTIN
AND STAY ACTIVE

~PEACE~

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Voted For: Livin Legend

this battle was ok........livin legend got it by a hair...livin legend you need to put some more complexity into your rhymes...it will help you A LOT.....upfront..i thought you might win untill the "still blow ya" line...i knew what you were gettin at....but don't ever make a refference to blowing another male....anyways....livin legend gets this

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