10 lines
no crew, hate or dr, or feedin
i'll start my verse now we each got 30
check in let me kno u see this

yo aight..........


technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision
ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me
battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty
you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers
they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot
mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it?
i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended
to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid
feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses


my bad on time lost track
go hed

Yea.....Check It......

I see you fixed your structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like you a fish, my punches are bait & you lookin ta catch theese lines
I beat you once by a landslide, and i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill ties, Cut's like Gary Coleman and demands rides
See you just a ho, & everyone know, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?, shit battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose your respect
Look at all those multies and big words you've used, wow kid you must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse you hard work became nothin but a shroud

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I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines
I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides
See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect
Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou

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technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision
ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me
battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty
you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers
they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot
mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it?
i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended
to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid
feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses
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opener was whack,finished strong though 8/10
nice werdplay in this as you can see,easy all around flow
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I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines
I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides
See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect
Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou
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struc was off just a tad but this hit way harder
nice creativity and way better attempt at striving for something
good punches and witty personals, 9/10
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vote/tech
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hit this up i need one vote to close it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339

Cut-
iight .. 5/10 opener
good flow and wordplay.. decent punches
good verse.. 7/10
Tech-
structure was a little bit off...
better punches
great creativity
enjoyed also
9.5/10

vote/technician

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Explain your votes better. Everything you had said could have been said about any battle. - Token

C- you had nice flow and thats about all, ok wordplay ok vocab, no mulites no hard hitting punches, but you put up a good fight cuz tech came weak.

T= Nice flow, Nice punches, and ok wordplay, ok vocab, no multies eitehr, some hard hittin punches, creativity nice verse

Punches- T
Flow- C
Vocab- T
Wordplay- T
Structure- C
Vote- T

Hit HTis UP Please

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110269

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The Return..

technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision
weak multi, second line..ehh coulda been better
ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me
battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty
played to all hell
you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers
they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot
doesn't rhyme, and all sex/jack off shit is mad played
mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it?
i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended
lil stretched, but not bad actually
to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid
feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses
ok, kinda creative

I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines
kinda played, but not bad
I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side....
Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides
ehhh kinda crap and filler...nah filler and crap
See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow
If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O
ok personals at the end, but the first line is played
So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?....
Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect
ok, not great
Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud
But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou
ok finisher, nothin great

Damn Tech you took it easy, you still won tho, a few ok punches and personals, nothin great. Cut your elevatin I can see. Keep at it man, try and stay away from sex and gay lines, cause those are mad played

Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

damn i didn't even think his verse was that good?...but i guess he had more personals, i don't even remember battlin u technician musta been a long time ago...anywas uppin...thanx for the votes people and the breakdowns...

...i would serve this nigga Tech...im the real Tech...

^ right....................Uppn.............
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tech pretty much took this, his punches hit harder, hit personals were a little better, an his wordplay was not too bad as well!!

cut dropped aiight, but he came a lil played!!!



please drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110247

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Punches - Tech
Wordplay - Tech
Vocab - ahh Tech
Creativity - Tech
Structure - eh...Tech
Flow - Cut

I think Tech had him with the punches and more creativity at hand...

Vote = Tech

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