ight 12-16 lines.... you spit first

ayo its pretty thug that nigga dat u hate cuz im cocky/ see me in the clk the color of broclli/ pushin 65 in a a 20 mile zone/ drop top tinted out sittin on crome/ gettin brainz from ya chicc while i bustin tha gear/ b4 i cum ima bust in ha ear/ n i dont care where u live at it really aint a thing thing/ u tha type of nigga dat'll get raped in sing sing/ so fuck u fuck ya gunz n fuck ya click/ clapp at u n turn ya stomach in2 pancake mix/ who the hell u think u killin wit ya lil shit/ u got duce duces i got glock 9s/ but i pop mines cop slimes n pop dimes/ dat got real dogh/ i deal wit real hoes dat deal wit dildos/ yo listen nigga im a real pro/

You claim to be a Lyrical Killah what you doin on my turf
I leave you black like da hearse and blue like pappa smurf
A verbal bruise, I cruise ya like a lamborghinis
Your rhymes are ugly, like fat guys who wear bakinis
YOu comin out to shout, Logik traps ya like a genie
even with yo 20 20 your rhymes still couldn't see me
A little FYI you say nigga a lot for white boy
And I was talkin to your girl, she described your dick as a light toy
You got no energy to spit, yet I rhyme like duracell
You messed wit me, you get beat so "go to hell!"
Its that L-O-G-I-K, comin out wit da verb play
No farice wheels here just open mic feel my game?
Comin down like rain, drivin you down to the ground
I keep it herbal to my brain, spit like dolby surround
So next time you wanna battle, ya best protect yours
You just been made by this mc director

uppin for votes............................................. .........................................

ayo its the come back/ u think u nyce nigga fuck dat/ i aint wite u lil dum bitch/ shut tha fuck up cuz im murderin u n ya whole click/ yo logik this rap shit u need 2 stop it/ when my album drop ya ass betta copp it/ my rythmes is suroundin u like dvds surround sound/ so image wut its like when u get me hype n make me let off a round/ u aint even spitin 2 go against me/ ur spittin about sutin thats off me completly/ faget ass niggas like u get knocked 4 speckin/tha last nigga i knocked out still sleepin/ i slam dunk on head like Vince Cater/ u dont want tha beef u jus wanna make movies/ till one of ya men get introduced 2 tha uzi/ sendin 9 or 10 sluga threw ya ski coat/ then shove tha gat in ya mouth make u give it a deep throat/ i got ma hand on tha hamma/ this will make ya bammas get the pictures like cameras/i got a clip in one pocket and a rubber in the otha/ cuz i may neva kno when i may bump in2 ya motha/ motha fucca

k .... disregard Y.O.z Lyrical Killa last rhyme..... he didn't realize just one round..... UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!

vote log1k, check the rules for 1, 12-16 lines, u came short, not to mention log1k took all punches, flow, vocab, meta's, personals, and structure, a 1 side battle.

breakdown
Flow Log1k
punches same
vocab same
metas same
personals same
structure same

yo nice battle an u only get one verse not 2, try an elevate lyrical,
mark this up as u gettin lyrically killed by log1k.

hahah thanks dawg that had me laughin.....makin me blush in shit.. ONE

my vote is logic nice 1 man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I vote log1k, because he followed the rules better, not to mention had the best structure flow and punches, he took it in every category and oh ya he had better word play too.


Can you please vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1101495

uppin for vote.............................................. ..............................

k we need votes.... can I get a lil support..... ight im just uppin again..... come on lets get this done

ayo ayo i jus wanna let ya kno this is ma 1st time wit this rap shit....so i kno i suck

damn wheres the love... uppin for votes once again