10 lines
blind spit
due in an hour after we both check in
usual voting rules except you cant vote if your under 300 posts
no recycling
good luck


this is my check in............

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How's this bitch gonna suggest that he's the voice of the streets
He scared to battle fairly so dick rydings his choice of some beef
You still droppin with a newbie type structure & think u established?
I've seen people use their heads better when they slicin' up cabbage
You'll never ammount to nothin, layin like crack fiends livin in dumps and...
Coughin sick with somthin, sayin you wack's not deemed a presumption
I cripple ur verse u do triple the work, just give ya Rec the quickest of jerk
Sit in the burbs UK that shit is obserd, fuck where u stay I rip u with words
Over 1000 posts cause everyone agreed to let you hang around a bit
Cause you have no skill, every tourney u entered u've been ran out of it

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the use of fake metaphors leaves the RB jury with 'corrupted visions',
before, real voters get here, ur d/r team takes it with intricate precision,
'consider my sonned' that couldn't be 'farther'* from the truth,
this kid, getting 'slated' so much, you'd think im droppin of the roof.**
like 'trees' in autumn, he should 'leave' my battles alone,
because my punches connect more, than the internets line of phone,
my verse might as well be 'ghost' wrote, this kids hair stands on end***
like 'peter pan' only time this kid consumes(MC'S), is when he pretends!
Look at this lord with a ring..dressed, posin all classy & smiling..
Ur girl overdid the eyelining..
& she still looks like somethin that's surrounded by white outlining




*farther=further
**you should get it, we have slate on some roofs over here!!
***his pic, last two bars
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108410

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Real nice battle..

Tech.. tight structure/flow.. good vocab throughout with some nice punches..
Parts were not connecting too well tho.. i.e the cabbage line.. didn't really seem appropiate as a decent punch, more like a rhyme needed..
The best bar rhyme was the dumps 'n/presumption... real nice.. creative
Slightly lacking consistancy but still a tight verse..
007.. again, tight structure/flow.. lacked the same calibre vocab but produced some good punches.. metas used throughout added to the creativity factor..
Didn't really miss a bar.. some good personals.. from both sides really..
Hard to judge.. but in the end.. 007's had more depth, consistancy and punches hat made impact.. Tech's was slightly behing mainly 'cos of a bar or so.. the d/r..rip you with words ones really.. could'a been hard punches..
Real close but in the end..

Vote - 007

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108818

aight i saw it like this....personals i think technician took personals you played off his avy and couple other things double 0 but his personals hit harder....Punches however go to oo7 by far some nice meta punches and a couple ok personal ones....The flow seemed a little off...for tech just that line where you couldn't quite get your ryhme in by the end so you continued it on the next line...i know vets do that but they usually add ......before it so you might wanna try that next time....mulits.....not really either of you noticably ...but overall i think that double 0 just came with good creativity in punches and edges this one out...no hate....keep actively voting both of you....check it....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108864

yeah technician got this easy.....better attempt at punches... better structure,,, against a basically.. newbish verse

vote technician,,

yo im not voteing i dont have 300 post but i just want to point out a funny line lol

"like 'peter pan' only time this kid consumes(MC'S), is when he pretends!"

yo i gotta give probs for this line that shit was kinda funny. nice 007

job both of you

A weak, lacking battle..
Both had some better points but overall both newbieish..
007 included some wordplay..but it was to simple & didnt worked well.
Tech had some ok..punches nothing really great..
& yea..like COM said attempts at punches..no real punches.
007 didnt do alot better..but atleast had some more of a personal aspect to them..
Hence the pic tech posted & the closer..
Close, weak..but still..close.

vote Double-0 Seven

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Tech=setup was nice punches were good his flow was smooth but he was fallin off a lot of times and he wasn’t really consistent with the punches

007=I liked the farther line and the opener u kept comin at em but the internet line is played out but u did get this 1 cause ur flow was better and I liked ur punches way better

vote=007