no d/r
no crew
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due 20min nafter check in or dq'd
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yo u never match to this quick to slap u in the face
its a race u bakwards,wackwards towards the humanrace
compared to the lace i see daily u need to braise ya lines
my mind cant comprehend how strenous of the kind
of fine print u try to produce but u like it rough, up the behind
just because u write a letter dont mean u can write a verse
and as u have ur keyboard i have my mic soundin out ya hertz
learn to rehearse cuz thats the only way ur surviving this lyrical bombsquad
shot u in that dirty ass, with straight ill make u scream "GOOD GOD"!
made u suck The Ends dick so u can taste a little of being a mod.

ok..................................

i was gon giv you a chance but now its ova/
clapp u wit the twin desert eagles and send u closer to jahova/
ur text is shitty from my opinion hoe/
blast off ur mouth so u wont be good in audio/
i "just blaze" dogg and i neva miss/
you call ur self "ghostie" cus you really dont exist/
i will cock the 5th bac, and put my cock in ur bitch lap/
so u takin bullets while she suckin where my kids at/
fuck that i destroy where u live at/
and let the 9 give you a "break" like you sponsor "kit- kat."
1 just blaze VOTE

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vote on this hot muffukin battle peoples!

yo u never match to this quick to slap u in the face
its a race u bakwards,wackwards towards the humanrace
kinda whack, but ok
compared to the lace i see daily u need to braise ya lines
of fine print u try to produce but u like it rough, up the behind
my mind cant comprehend how strenous of the kind
no punch, multis are worthless if they aren't also punches/personals. Sex shit is mad played
just because u write a letter dont mean u can write a verse
and as u have ur keyboard i have my mic soundin out ya hertz
kinda weak
learn to rehearse cuz thats the only way ur surviving this lyrical bombsquad
shot u in that dirty ass, with straight ill make u scream "GOOD GOD"!
made u suck The Ends dick so u can taste a little of being a mod.
[b]whack[b]


i was gon giv you a chance but now its ova/
clapp u wit the twin desert eagles and send u closer to jahova/
[b]wow..bad
ur text is shitty from my opinion hoe/
blast off ur mouth so u wont be good in audio/
weak punch
i "just blaze" dogg and i neva miss/
you call ur self "ghostie" cus you really dont exist/
refrain from usin ya name in ya own verse. Second line ok
i will cock the 5th bac, and put my cock in ur bitch lap/
so u takin bullets while she suckin where my kids at/
played
fuck that i destroy where u live at/
and let the 9 give you a "break" like you sponsor "kit- kat."
1 just blaze VOTE
weak..played..whack

Shit...close battle cause ya both need to elevate..or try garder..I give the win to Ghostie...he had the best punch. JB had one ok one.

Drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

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Ghostie had the better flow in this battle

Just Blaze - controlled the wordplay

Punches - TIED (No one dominated in this field because I didnt see any personal punches thrown.....)

Structure - Ghostie had a better structure...The bar remained even throw the entire battle. The other guy needs to work on evening out his bars.....

I vote Ghostie cuz he maintained a better verse with his flow...... Close battle because not many hard punches were thrown....


Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

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