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01-23-04, 06:50 AM
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Maggot
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The Calling
IP:
The Message strong among prophets with Evil Hatred Plans...
Few man search for Reasons Why Love Is Spread across the Land... Try To Walk a Righteous Life but Only finding shut-doors and Rejection... Climbing This Tall Ladder To heaven but its goin tha wrong Direction... So i'm declined to alter my persona In a way thats popular with tha Youth... Grasping This Thin Air, With Garmend Thoughts On trying to get the Truth... In This Altered-Life i'm on the edge screaming for a Chance to Live... Last Breath of humanity,This Secret Society holds unlocked Facts to Give.. Livin my Lyrics thru my Spirit just because My Inner Heart is Burned... I Keep Looking For Info But nothin is shown for me to Eva Learn... Away From This Fight in the Day of Light I Shine proudly among Few... But my Surrounding Environment Rejects the self racists among You... The Lies For My People trying to Envision the Equal Rights.. Believiing Change Gon Come but i'm anticapting Evil-In-Sight... No Existence Or Choice So my Voice clamped In Metal Machines... Fatal Plunge into my Membrane reveales these Silent-Screams... Watcing these Violent-Dreams but only Chuckles Comes Out... To Believ That i Say i'm Unhealthy They Say my thinking in Doubt.. I'm Accepting my Wished-Chances drowned in A Bed Of Lies... An Illogical Rise This Exodus Happiness Is Dead Right Before My Eyes... The Opening Song Is Strong This Ghetto Quran Is Torn,.. Watching A Blueprint Of Mixed Signals Iz Physically Wrong,.. Thiz Mythical Sky Rise Above Passion So My Name Haz Begun... Reigning Thiz Game Is Slung Edging Wordz Cuz Pain On My Tung... Maiming My Lung Playing The Field For Too Long Praying This Wheel... Being Real Iz My Ambition Of Dropping Siccness And Staying Ill... So What I Saw U Seen And What Is Watched Remains A Dream... Vein In My Spleen Splilling My Gutz Out Is Classed As Esteem... I'm Trying To Catch The Bus To Humanity But Itz Takin A Wrong Turn... My Ego Damaged, Pride Intact But Cower As Even The Strong Get Burned...
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01-23-04, 07:03 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
lines were too long but appart from that, nice verse and flow
vocab was a bit week actually |
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01-23-04, 12:41 PM
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Maggot
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IP:
Good Lookz
My Linkz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109183 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109177
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Tisk Tisk@Blak Siinz Number One Herb On Rap Battles! Crime - Stealing Another Person's Name .. Punishment - Severe Herbin .. DO NOT BATTLE BLAK SIINZ HE IS A NAME BITER. |
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