I'd Like Some Honest Replies...Leave A Link To A Piece or Something of Yours and I Will Reply...

Ill Travel A Trillion Miles If You Can Impress The Best/
And If You Don't, Youll Forget What Breathing Is When I Strike Your Chest/
Antartical Brain Waves Rain On You In Blizzard Storms/
With A Heart More Glacial Then Hydrogen In Liquid Form/
Five point Five times Four equals Twenty-Two/
Divide it by Two which equals the Eleventh Letter Thats Coming For You/
I Suggest You Read Max Scheler's Man's Place In The Universe/
That States Before Ya'll Spit You Need To Rehearse Your Stupid Verse/
Then I Commmunicate With You In A Telepathic Manner/
And Explain The Consequence For Facing Knave That Will Eat You Like A Lanner/
The Other Day I Sat Down With Charles Spearmen To Discuss The Human Mind/
He Was Disgusted When I Said To Be The Nicest Emcee Alive/
With Complex Rhymes, Non-Rehearsed Lines With A Mic/
Such A Bright Light That It Leaves Blind With Supernatural Sight/
Scan My Resume Your Jaw Would Drop to The Ground/
When You Noticed How Many Emcees Got Ripped At Speed Of Sound /
Ill Attack Your Retina and Melt The Cones and Rods From Far/
With My Rhymes That Are Hotter Then The Sirius Binary Star/
No One Will Ever Be More Superior Then Knave/
Im So Blasphemous I Told God That I Was Greater Then He Ever Became/
With the Possesion Of Energy Of 100 Legions of Emcees, It Doesnt Matter/
Cause With My Own Power I Can Turn You Into Dark Matter/
In This Materialistical Lyrical Mistiful Planet We Roam/
I Step On The Ground And Cease Everything That Dies and Is Born/
Wiser Then Three Wise Men, Smarter Then Einstein Clones/
Stronger Then Galiath With Steroids Inserted Into The Vessels of His Bones/
My Blood Pressure Rises With Varicose Veins Erupting From My Neck/
More Explosive then Ammonium Nitrate, Fuel Oil, and Meth/
And Ill Invite Your Family To The Center of an Invisible Target in the Ground/
And Immediatly They Shall Obsorb All The Sniper Rounds/
Im President of the National Rifle Association/
Restarting In The Creation of Hisham Maxim's Machine Gun Explanations/
To Create The First Human Verbal Weapon/
Dispersing Seven Words Per Second Knocking Eight Hundred Seventy-Seven Pounders Off Leverage/
Strike Your Forehead Until Your Limb-Numb/
But For Some Reason Psychologist Emile Cue Said I Suffered From Narcissism/
"That Is Not Possible...Im The Greatest To Set Foot Since Before Genesis/
Intricately Compositoned Sentences Without Apprentices"/
For The First Time Ever I Was Scared To Never Be Able To Spit/
Or Be Able To Rip or Split Whatever or Whoever I Wished/
I Was Chased In A Rolls Royce Colored Metallic Teal/
My Acceleration Increased Such As A Chettah After A Roe Deer/
They Caught Up And They Told Me "Dont Worry It Wont Be Filed/
Your Just Lyrically Mentally Disordered"...I Just Stared And Smiled//
uppin'^^

Uppin

i aint really understand alot cuz my iq aint the best but

i made 2 colums:

nice and bunk;



BUNK:


Ill Travel A Trillion Miles If You Can Impress The Best/
And If You Don't, Youll Forget What Breathing Is When I Strike Your Chest/

- makes me wanna ambush you when you arrive, kill you first type shit. jus to be safe.

Antartical Brain Waves Rain On You In Blizzard Storms/ -
With A Heart More Glacial Then Hydrogen In Liquid Form/

- i dunno what that means, cuz if you aint got heart what the fuck you doin?

Five point Five times Four equals Twenty-Two/
Divide it by Two which equals the Eleventh Letter Thats Coming For You/

- 2 complicated for me sorry

I Suggest You Read Max Scheler's Man's Place In The Universe/
That States Before Ya'll Spit You Need To Rehearse Your Stupid Verse/

- fuck that shit

And Explain The Consequence For Facing Knave That Will Eat You Like A Lanner/

- da whaaaaaaaaat?


The Other Day I Sat Down With Charles Spearmen To Discuss The Human Mind/
He Was Disgusted When I Said To Be The Nicest Emcee Alive/

- that shits just plain 2 much for my brain to handle...


Scan My Resume Your Jaw Would Drop to The Ground/
When You Noticed How Many Emcees Got Ripped At Speed Of Sound /

- resume? speed of sound? noticed?

Im President of the National Rifle Association/ - you a HEAT SCORE!!



NICE!

Then I Commmunicate With You In A Telepathic Manner/

- SICK!

With Complex Rhymes, Non-Rehearsed Lines With A Mic/
Such A Bright Light That It Leaves Blind With Supernatural Sight/

- DAMN!

Ill Attack Your Retina and Melt The Cones and Rods From Far/
With My Rhymes That Are Hotter Then The Sirius Binary Star/

- SHITJEAH


its just 2 long for me to finish but someone can finish it off yo.,...


all in all you gotta USE MORE SLANG so plain OLD COPS CANT READ YO RIMES

like joe coudie does check it.

"THEY 2 HEATY like PEEDI readin HOW TO MAKE CRACK" - joe coudie

lol..sorry u couldnt understand....im complex like that...lol...j/p...aight thx for you atleast trying your best to reply....uppin

,,This was okay..remember this is text..not audio..you don't need to use the //...your flow was decent..your vocab was okay..this was an average drop..click on my sigs..

sometimes i cry cuz i wish i was a genius
but im insane cuz my brain feel that it needs this i mean it...
things are 2 confusin i just want to get put on like
the door be closin an im tryin to put my foot on...

cuz im walkin an talkin on a thin line
im tryin an tryin and still spittin thin lines
my crimes still haunt me
find me on the barges
im battilin myself and im battilin charges...

im 23 posts old
my toasts cold
my coat folds
and hides my gun
sun
you better run

This was pretty long, a bit hard to follow but i read it over.. it was pretty nice. Great vocab... Im not sure i can give a rating..