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Lyrical Roach 0 0%
Diverse 5 100.00%
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Old 01-20-04, 01:54 PM   #1
Diverse
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Diverse vs. Lyrical Roach

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10-12 lines
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Old 01-20-04, 03:44 PM   #2
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mods please close this b/c he is going to no show...and does this mean i wasted my battle credits for no reason?
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Old 01-22-04, 11:49 AM   #3
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YO CHECK IT....................



You don't rap right, I eat M.C.'s wid ma lyrical appetite,
So i quess rapping ain't ya speciality,Diverse you'll be ma frist fatilty,
Cause i'm fucking with your morality,
You wanna spit with stlyes galore, I'll wash ya mouth out with verbal cow manore,You can't hack it, I'll win this battle fa sure!!!
Hanging around this battle is a quest,
Cause a saw ya wid 2 NACRAPHLIAC'S, loving it,
In a grave yard BUM FEST!!!
I'm throwing all the punches, But not with ma fist's,
I quess i'll have to put diverse, on ma dissmisal list!!!!!!!
 
Old 01-22-04, 12:53 PM   #4
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This roach ain't a problem, that's why i brought the Raid
Step on this bug, exterminated, now his insides are displayed
RB ain't no home for a roach, move back to Joe's Apartment
Just keep on being a little pest, emceeing is my department
You say diverse is G.M.H.K cuz i'm Givin Mc's Heavy Knockouts
The only way you show intelligence is cuz you got a smart mouth
Battles over, watch this roach get smoked cuz he's full of dope
Not even the Make a Wish foundation could bring you any hope
Lyrical Roach is too low on the food chain to have a chance to evolve
Just walking through, heard a crunch on my shoe, problem solved....

just read his bio.......
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Old 01-22-04, 02:12 PM   #5
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Erm...

roach - you had no hard hittin punches, flow was there in places but not all the way through, fix your structure and diss personally.

diverse - nice AGAIN, hard punches and nice personals, flow was up to scratch and I loved the closer.

v/ Diverse

Yo Diverse, you didnt poll on my battle so can you go and do it...links in my sig
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Old 01-22-04, 02:19 PM   #6
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hehe diverse had the easiest material in the world to work with on this shit right here...lol what kind of a name is lyrical roach....anyway punches definitely go to diverse along with personals wordplay and overall flow..i saw this as a striaght merkin...Roach your shit was fine but your punches were weak and you gotta be more personal with him like talk about his bio his avy his name...get creative peace out check this out.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108864
 
Old 01-22-04, 03:27 PM   #7
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uppin this shit......................1x...................... .........................
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Old 01-23-04, 09:33 AM   #8
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diverse killed it here!!
harder punches an personals, better wordplay, an overall better verse!!!
lyrical roach you just came pretty weak, with no really hard hitting punches!!!!

peace
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Old 01-23-04, 12:55 PM   #9
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Diverse came half assed and still killed the roach
no hate to diverse i just know u can do better...
but for this one u didnt have to...a few nice line either way though

roach just needs to work...keep battlin..flow wasn't that bad
but punches just didnt hit at all..
structure is ok but could be better as well...make your lines even
it helps your flow...

and to be honest you might wanna change your name too Lyrical Roach.. lmao

v/Diverse
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Old 01-24-04, 11:42 AM   #10
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uppin this shit for more votes............................................. .2x.......................
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Old 01-24-04, 11:46 AM   #11
KiLlEr EmCeE
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diverse takes it in every category...
roach- ya punches were weak man...ur flow waz off...n ya structure..werk on it.....elevate man....
breakdown:\
punches: d
flow: d
humour: ......
vote: diverse....
dis iz an honest vote...
now can u plze drop a vote on dis battle?...thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108746
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