joe coudies improvin im groovin an shmoozin she groomin we boozin she loosin im snoozin im loose an im new an im coudie im provin im brutal im movin ya crew an im movin the white shoot swoopin an scoopin the night the hoopties hoopin groupies groupin aight ima drop bombs like nukes nukin nice call me duke nuke em tight you jukin a fight its aight im tight bright lights despite you be pukin up mics leave ya troop boots up hooten a pipe im loopin a fight im so sick ima shook all night roots an juice like shoots and rice make you blind how i took all sight so look alright i gotta book to write i like nooks an crannies got crooks an grannies put cooks and shook foots on they fanny packs you a handy rap muthafucka im creepin steep wit fleets a leak speakin heat on a track eatin freaks beatin geeks with stacks my rap reekin neat greet streets an creeks i gat beef shat leef tap e an crap d's so freeze you fuckin yella parakeets glarin g fair is me keet you in the cella wit my pair a cleats hairy cheeks barely speak im very bleek rarely keep bones cuz im not a collector what the @#%$???? YO you ready?? i dunno if your ready ill cut both yo heads off and tie ya hair together spin it around like a bolo and paint the walls red.... muthafucka then i drop yo heads on the floor then pop some feds through the door i coped some lead from the store i brought lots shot yo head from a boar ya sore cuz im riddilin ya spine like im riddilin yo rime like im diddilin a dime yo its mine i get high on my own supply an im fine its crime its time to find your elbow pick it up while i lop off ya shell toe you think you fuckin with joe coudie?

..I stop reading this after few lines..your structure was all fucked up...

ahhahahahah....

aaaahahahahahahha

Structures fucked...Open Mic sucked. It looked like you went to rhymezone.com and just tried to throw the words together...this was sad.

Problems:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108962

fuck you muthafucka you WISH you were me muthafucka the fuck outta here wit yo bitch ass talkin bout structure boi if you cant read it right thats yo problem...fuckin wankstas....

if you cant battle coudie
truly ya 2 fruity
hooty who the fuck are you...
booty?
ill shoot at you you boo me so sue me
i b twice the hype that yo crew be
ya knew me
you tryin to hype a fight in yo crew-t
i gotta cut off yo heads its my duty
i gotta buck off some lead i got my
truck off yo bed
my lucks off the dead
yo carboard box is brown painted red
im stickin a dick in yo sister
im stickin a knife in yo dad
a gun in yo waist ~yeah
im that bad
im that sad and glad to jump up to beat down
muthafuckas like you on the street clown....

well man ur shit was fucked up and some a these lines in this new one man done make sense at all..."crew-t" looks like ya added the t just to rhyme..."i gotta buck off some lead i got my
truck off yo bed // my lucks off the dead" what the fuck does that mean???..."hooty who the fuck are you...
booty?" random words to make it rhyme man sorry but its true... some messed up shit prolly only liked one line outta the whole thing

im tellin you kid seriously LISTEN UP CUZ THIS HOW ITS GOIN DOWN IN 2004.....AIGHT KID??? YOU GOTTA TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THE POLICE MIGHT BE PEEPIN YO SHIT SO YOU GOTTA BE WRITIN AEYTHING ON THE DL AIIGHT?? YOU MIGHT NOT GET MY LYRICS AT FACE VALUE BUT IF YOU FROM WHERE IM FROM AND YOU THINK HARD ENUF YOU WILL START TO UNDERSTAND. IL EXPLAIN 1 LINE FOR YOU AIIGHT?


A CREW T IS THOSE TSHIRTS THAT BE CREW NECKS....

ANYWAYS......HAHAHHAA........

Im Dirt...hahahahah

..start replying to other open mics,,,

aiight...

why no one tryin to battle lets do this someone jump up to get beat down...

what you wanna battle someone with them lyrics? man do what u want but i can tell u that ull prolly lose so brace urself

im new here so i dont have much room to talk but we are all in a agreemneton this piece....WHAT THE FUCK!!! PUT THE CRACK PIPE DOWN!!
ok sorry anyways coudie is my hero i wanna rhyme just like him coudie holla back tell me what you think

im rocking a crew-t cause im joe coudie froot loops dirty boots fruity booty yeah im that bad really just sad id be glad to have ya'll kick my ass


alright peeps dis is gonna be hot in 2004 so get up on it aight



get the fuck outta here man joe you straight suck