sorry bout the delay. messed up the post. ten lines min. post after me within ten minutes. check in etc.

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checkin in........................................

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

k, here's my verse.
just watch dragon i as i fly by like ty {a uk rapper, did a song called music to fly too...}
why try and clash with a monster when you know you'll die?
i'm a dragon, and you know it's because i spit flame,
whereas it's plain you spit lame without the aid of you're brain,
you're brainless, nameless noob with no grove,
you ryhmes don't soothe so bitch just get out of the booth,
the only thing that'll snap is my patience,
leave u mentally unsound in a house with patients
a verbal battering that'll shake the underground around,
and when the blast has past i cast you're reamins to lost and found,
you're going down, like you're momma when i first met her,
first manged to get her screaming 'There Ain't nothing Better!'
you know you're just a young kiddies card game,
while i'm the best, blessed with ability that begets fame,
you're just the same it seem as fool
unable to use even half you're brain as a tool.

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My DNA design entertwines the Einsteins mind/
Rhymed to belay why you stay meat mending/

Constantly scheming while your dreaming/
To become what everyone thinks I'm seeming/

This aint nothing but a Drew Carey(ous) way to see you ream/
Your invisible in this battle like sauna steams/

Ima go to your funeral, an open casket/
Light a match and watch you blasted/

Sit back relax and gather your leftover stashes/
Then roll you up and smoke your ashes/


~ Done ~

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

uppin

this is my first time, plz vote.. thanks!

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

uppin yo!

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

damn ya all, at least use the poll!!!!

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"Nigga, YoU JuS' GoT KnOcKeD Da' FuCk OuT!"

uppin... can somebody please vote? pleeeeaaasseeee????

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Dragon had some nice shit. A well designed verse with good punches and metas. That was all he needed. Snap came very basic. Nothin great, played lines, and no creativity or complicated rhymes. Vote=Dragon
Please drop an honest one here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109347

uppin. can seombody please vote! i need some scrores and such!!!

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uppin 3!!!!!!!!!!!! please somebody!!!! i need a score of some kind!!

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uppin 4. anybody out there willing to vote? anybody at all?

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dragon i took dis one cuz his lines were better and also his closer took da battle....
vote=dragon

One liner = Gone -Token

upping 5? can another 4 people come and vote on this?

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