10-12 lines
usual rules
drop first
i'll spit after
g'luck cuz you'll need it

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prepare to see free style at its finest. son this time its educational

You aint gangsta, you’re a fucking gay,
Your mum’s been telling me you sucked off ray-ray,
Look, diverse I’m still battling your boyfriend but he’s taking time,
I think I can handle 2 faggots with my sweet rhymes,
It was a bit suspicious that you were both offline at the same time,
I’m tired of eating people, I’m a drink you like wine,
You better give up rapping because stealing verses is a crime,
I’ll chop you into to pieces and feed you to the swine,
His names diverse coz he dies with every verse,
You aint gonna beat me because you obviously got a curse,
You jack like lyrics like they’re a fucking purse,
Mess with me and your next ride will be in a fucking hearse.

diverse you pussy, it's not like you got a social life.

oh shit...deadeye, here's your first loss bro....without even trying

This kid can't be pretty upon receipt of a facial fracture
talked shit to me but was completely unaware of my stature
Deadeye can't see me as if he was both cycloptic and blind
Made a huge ass of himself that's exactly why he's falling behind
just look at his sig, it's obvious that he's really stuck on himself
Needed a dick rider to win but guess he couldn't find anyone else
You're still new to this board so i'll be the first to break you in
Simplistic rhyme style and shit talking will never earn you any wins
your not ready for a battle of this caliber, go back and earn clearance
Self obsessed little newb, looks like i fucked up your online appearance
Watch this little girl complain, feelin intruded by my malpractice with text
just admit that your a bitch deadeye, don't be ashamed of your sex

should be good enough to merk your herb ass...

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more of a social life than you herb....just shutup and lose...

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Dead

You aint gangsta, you’re a fucking gay,
Your mum’s been telling me you sucked off ray-ray,
*static sounds* 36 to base over, we have a wack newbie battling *static sounds* Ya Roger that...damn kids these days
Look, diverse I’m still battling your boyfriend but he’s taking time,
I think I can handle 2 faggots with my sweet rhymes,
No punch
It was a bit suspicious that you were both offline at the same time,
I’m tired of eating people, I’m a drink you like wine,
wack, alot of people are offline at the same time and the concept was wack too
You better give up rapping because stealing verses is a crime,
I’ll chop you into to pieces and feed you to the swine,
blah..meh...blah... what more can i say?
His names diverse coz he dies with every verse,
You aint gonna beat me because you obviously got a curse,
how..expand on ya punches kid
You jack like lyrics like they’re a fucking purse,
Mess with me and your next ride will be in a fucking hearse.
actually an ok closer


Diverse

This kid can't be pretty upon receipt of a facial fracture
talked shit to me but was completely unaware of my stature
Blah.. not really direct punch
Deadeye can't see me as if he was both cycloptic and blind
Made a huge ass of himself that's exactly why he's falling behind
ok punch..not really hard hitting though
just look at his sig, it's obvious that he's really stuck on himself
Needed a dick rider to win but guess he couldn't find anyone else
decent punch
You're still new to this board so i'll be the first to break you in
Simplistic rhyme style and shit talking will never earn you any wins
True punch... decent
your not ready for a battle of this caliber, go back and earn clearance
Self obsessed little newb, looks like i fucked up your online appearance
ok punch... not really hard hitting again
Watch this little girl complain, feelin intruded by my malpractice with text
just admit that your a bitch deadeye, don't be ashamed of your sex
Decent closer


Overall - this was a very weak battle but diverse's quick key was enough to over throw this newbie...boths punches were blah but diverse had some decent ones

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diverse, your crap you started on me but still wanted to go second. you insult my rhyme scheme but you change every two lines (dumb fuck). we can tell by your picture your a cock we don't have to read anything. im self obessed but your lyrics are obviously proceessed and if you weren't trying how come it took you 31 minutes.

you bitch

b/c unlike you i have a life fuckin herb...suck it up little girl..your wack and it's obvious...and for the record it took me about 6 minutes to write that half-ass verse that's gonna serve you 5-0...my rhyme scheme didn't change you have no clue about real emceeing...don't expect to make a name for yourself on this board with skills (or lack there of) like what you just dropped...haha...bring on the votes...

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only losers whine............you're just a bad sport...................

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deadeye - ok structure.........flow is ok.........vocab is pretty basic...........wasnt feelin the multis..........wordplay is aight..........most of the punches didnt connect.........no personals........

diverse - good structure........flow is on target.......vocab is pretty good.........multis were nice........pretty good wordplay..........some of ya punches were tight..........ok personals......

conclusion - diverse takes this in flow, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote

VOTE - DIVERSE

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019

thanx........

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still uppin for more votes..................2x.............

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You aint gangsta, you’re a fucking gay,
Your mum’s been telling me you sucked off ray-ray,
^wtf is that ....that is sad i don't know how to rate that....
Look, diverse I’m still battling your boyfriend but he’s taking time,
I think I can handle 2 faggots with my sweet rhymes,
Bahahah omg that was horrible far too simplistic even for freestyle....
It was a bit suspicious that you were both offline at the same time,
I’m tired of eating people, I’m a drink you like wine,
that was almost a punch ......a weak one
You better give up rapping because stealing verses is a crime,
I’ll chop you into to pieces and feed you to the swine,
^are you a farmer....this line was dumb your jus using first whack word that comes to mind...
His names diverse coz he dies with every verse,
You aint gonna beat me because you obviously got a curse,
^WOW no not ok ....the worst line ever.....
You jack like lyrics like they’re a fucking purse,
Mess with me and your next ride will be in a fucking hearse.
^ok fine whatever i don't wanna evaluate this buti will...it was the worst thing i have ever read on RB.....LOOk in my sig before you say i don'tknow what i'm talkin about...freestyle cypher fanatic...but that was the worst freestyle ever,......EVER give up now.....

Diverse wins......

This kid can't be pretty upon receipt of a facial fracture
talked shit to me but was completely unaware of my stature
^well thats a kinda punch
Deadeye can't see me as if he was both cycloptic and blind
Made a huge ass of himself that's exactly why he's falling behind
^well thats a weak line but really you don't need much...
just look at his sig, it's obvious that he's really stuck on himself
Needed a dick rider to win but guess he couldn't find anyone else
^what is this...throw a punch so that you don't lose this man...
You're still new to this board so i'll be the first to break you in
Simplistic rhyme style and shit talking will never earn you any wins
^there it is...ok this punch took it for you at this point...
your not ready for a battle of this caliber, go back and earn clearance
Self obsessed little newb, looks like i fucked up your online appearance
^nice nice...i like it...hehe online...appearacne ahhahhahaha
Watch this little girl complain, feelin intruded by my malpractice with text
just admit that your a bitch deadeye, don't be ashamed of your sex
6ahhaha nice closer this is yours the power is yours......

peace hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...64&page=2&pp=15

You aint gangsta, you’re a fucking gay,
Your mum’s been telling me you sucked off ray-ray,
Look, diverse I’m still battling your boyfriend but he’s taking time,
I think I can handle 2 faggots with my sweet rhymes,
whackness Emergency Center!!!!!!!
It was a bit suspicious that you were both offline at the same time,
I’m tired of eating people, I’m a drink you like wine,
wow......jus......bad....
You better give up rapping because stealing verses is a crime,
I’ll chop you into to pieces and feed you to the swine,
His names diverse coz he dies with every verse,
You aint gonna beat me because you obviously got a curse,
You jack like lyrics like they’re a fucking purse,
Mess with me and your next ride will be in a fucking hearse.
blah...newb crap.....elevate...come up with more complicated shit


This kid can't be pretty upon receipt of a facial fracture
talked shit to me but was completely unaware of my stature
ehh ok
Deadeye can't see me as if he was both cycloptic and blind
Made a huge ass of himself that's exactly why he's falling behind
blah
just look at his sig, it's obvious that he's really stuck on himself
Needed a dick rider to win but guess he couldn't find anyone else
weak
You're still new to this board so i'll be the first to break you in
Simplistic rhyme style and shit talking will never earn you any wins
good
your not ready for a battle of this caliber, go back and earn clearance
Self obsessed little newb, looks like i fucked up your online appearance
decent punch
Watch this little girl complain, feelin intruded by my malpractice with text
just admit that your a bitch deadeye, don't be ashamed of your sex
played but otherwise OK
Diverse wins this, harder punches, more complexity, and a better flow. MC keep elevatin, check out the Whackness Emergence Center.

Please drop an honest vote here. I took the time for you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

bwahahaha, oh wow. diverse took this no problem.. and i can tell he didnt even try. deadeye, if you're gunna be a newb and talk a lot of shit, then you better be able to back it up. obviously you cant.

vote-diverse.