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| dazasta |
  
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5 | 100.00% |
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01-30-04, 06:39 PM
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xNY~NJx
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dazasta vs CAMROK
IP: 244A F706
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Verse due by 9pm eastern time doesn't matter who goes first no feedin, no d/r votes Check in now. Here's my check in...
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01-30-04, 06:44 PM
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So Tired Of It.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
ok check in...and do ur verse now..i dont want a 9:00 deadline..to damn late
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01-30-04, 07:17 PM
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So Tired Of It.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
sit and watch...another one of daz's gifted drops......
if i was dame...i'd prove that this cam aint fit for ROC... stop...arguing..i took this battle to amuse ya.... daz already won...call it..back to the future..... Rappin'..your tutor....fix ur tattered dreams..... chuz you cover more balls..then ESPN magazines... i bag a feen...daz is hott...everyone wants to read.... includin' you...so you can edit...study... and go back and feed... so pack some weed...admit it kid..im better..It's true... aformentioned packin'...so i can finally level with you... whatever this dude...thinks...is used like an under pass.. dont rep jerz kid..you should be reppin under daz.... a blunder as...of now... like tryna pay for mail... wack as you are...go back and revamp 9 times..like aol i spray it well...could win this battle with Mickey Quote's... and when ur not battling me...your battles are looked over like sticky notes... strictly dope...exploding ill...lke compressed farts.. and your verse reminds me of..well...stretch marks...
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01-30-04, 07:45 PM
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So Tired Of It.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
how long does it take to post a verse.........hurry so i can be 9-0
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01-30-04, 07:52 PM
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xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Dazasta, gonna put u down, like bubba's ur masta
Plaster this jerz boy, turn him into a dead rappa Ur punches aren't hard, makes me break out in laughter After this rhyme, gonna make u a new name, cracka? I'll blow up your flow, as the street light turns "go" then u run scared, as your whole body explodes From my rhymes, they provide an internal reaction can't get away, I'm attackin, this is my action unlike subtraction, ground over you, that is the fraction this will happen, when I bury you in the ground can't believe ur in this battle, stepin to my town turn this bitch up-side-down, watch his fat dribble down Your lines must be pre-written, same way ur dick is hidden pry that bitch on out, when hittin, times-a-tickin must hurt worse than a belly button ring rippin ur so scared from reading this, right now he's probably shittin U might as well quit, this just isn't ya niche trying to rap, but u studder, my rhymes made ya twitch Just sit, you lost, get outta my face bitch Lets see some votes on this... oh yea, had to have the late time spit.. had to do a few other things first
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01-30-04, 10:13 PM
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So Tired Of It.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
uppin for votes............................................. ...........numero uno
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01-31-04, 12:00 AM
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You're Like Melon
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IP: 1B2C BC6D
punches d: wack as you are...go back and revamp 9 times..like aol
i spray it well...could win this battle with Mickey Quote's... wordplay d: sit and watch...another one of daz's gifted drops...... if i was dame...i'd prove that this cam aint fit for ROC... multies cam: Your lines must be pre-written, same way ur dick is hidden pry that bitch on out, when hittin, times-a-tickin must hurt worse than a belly button ring rippin ur so scared from reading this, right now he's probably shittin personals d: Rappin'..your tutor....fix ur tattered dreams..... chuz you cover more balls..then ESPN magazines... flow both: both didnt have stretched bars so thats good overall i gotta go with dazasta
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01-31-04, 01:39 PM
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xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Alright.. cool... don't really know about the punches. Was kinda close, and my verse was filled with them. Thanks for the honest vote though. This battles gonna be close..
Lets see some more votes up on this.. uppinnnn (1)
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01-31-04, 02:46 PM
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\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 95BE 951D
dazasta
you had some nice punches, very witty an some hard hitting ones, your wordplay was nice, you i gettin better in all your battles, a nice structure, some aiight multies, a nice battle verse. camrock your punches were pretty weak, e.g Quote:
?????????? you did have he better multies, but other than that your verse was weak vote-dazasta a better battle verse, harder hitting punches win the battle for him!! |
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01-31-04, 03:30 PM
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xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
aiight buddy.. uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn (2)
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01-31-04, 07:07 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: E4E9 28ED
I don't know what in da hell happened to Camrok's flow, metaphors, and puchlines........dawg what were you thinking about man. I've saw you drop much doper flows than this man..... you need to practice or you were just playing....... or something. Overall you did o.k. but not your best and far from it if you ask me of course. Instead of focusing on multis focus on dissing the opponent and taking da win, but highly dissapointed. Dazasta seems like you did a good job focusing on your punchlines and metaphors to diss Camrok's name and his flow and shit. Overall a decent battle I can say, both of ya'll jus keep getting better aight.
Vote on here man..........they getting slept on............. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
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02-01-04, 01:05 AM
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xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
lol.. yea suppose u got a point.. dunno what i was doin, i felt like rhyming almost every word i guess
lets get te rest of these votes on.. get me my loss, unless someone actually likes it (lol) upppin 3
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02-01-04, 12:49 PM
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xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
comn peeps.. upppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn (4)
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02-01-04, 04:15 PM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Tight battle..
Daz.. real nice punches.. sticky notes/mail etc.. creative and amusing.. structure was a bit off.. not really used to seein that many ... Consistant... good metas throughout.. original touches.. good personal shot too.. Overall a pretty tight verse.. Cam.. tight structure.. short and sharp.. good disses.. although the verse lacked any standout punches.. more run of the mill attacks than anything.. Tight multie use.. as well as good vocab throughout.. A tight verse.. but didn't match Daz's creativity and punches.. Vote - Dazasta |
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02-01-04, 05:24 PM
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All true, but Cam deserves a little more credit. For a frontlines battler he's doing exceptionally well. It's just that Daz always picks on the less fortunate. But i do have to agree, Daz had better..& by far more witty punches, some slightly funny. This was decisive in this battle.. The multies Cam used are irrelevant they didnt add anything to his verse. Except a extra dimension that is ^. So my vote goes to Dazasta, For having a better battle verse. vote Dazasta |
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