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Soft Focus: The Weathers Art
IP: 1B3B C284
Winter A dark silent walk home I glance to see the beautiful trees glow Remarkable the vision after the storm laid a blanket of snow Trapped in this peace of mind of the soft focus of the evils illusion Sparkling drops of snow easing my mind putting rest to confusion It's contagious I could stare at the mysterious eye candy all night An never feel I’ve had enough, It helps my ego..believe I’m alright Who would have thought just a walk could be a helpful therapist Take away the evil stop you from going and slitting your wrist Eyes feel focused staring at how the ecosystem actually works The winter is so precious maybe it's because of Jesus’ birth Spring The year is changing like the baby who was born in December Gods crying rain to wash up snow another season to remember Paralyzing hate with waterfall of lust that begins to prove love You sit and hear the angels play with the thunder from above Puddles left in the ground from the rain storm...nights perfection You stare in the dew of the damp leaves to see your reflection Imperishable the items on the trees that begin to slowly sprout The lakes begin to flow hard and you see fishermen netting trout This season is another blessing in disguise from powerful angels We pray to the keeper of earth to show we're forever thankful Summer Infatuated by the power from the sun and the bliss handed Down in rays letting flowers bloom an migrated birds be landed Animals awake from hibernation morning you hear birds chirping Look out side at the surroundings and see every things working From the smallest insect to the largest bear summers majestic With a symphony of sounds in the morning leaving us going hectic Wake up a little early so you see the sun go down feel the sunset Open yours eye like flowers see summer is beautiful...no regrets Heating up the water so our race can swim and enjoy pleasure Another season change that was opened up golden treasure Fall The temperature starts to fall similar to the leaves on the trees See the animals packing up an birds getting ready to be diseased Flowers being drowned in rain rivers start to have a light ice A sheet so thin but sets the mood just right an for know price Covered in leaves and mud from a little river on your property You can tell the seasons taken to you by the rain fallen promptly Trust this season will come back with more stormy weather Rain drenching ya close fog staling your journy..anything better? This is special in its own little way everything is a young waterfall Maybe this is actually why they declare this fallen season...fall The Art Seasons can't cure the blind but they help them feel there way Give a right purpose similar to thoughts on why Christians pray Showing different pictures from rivers to snow on the trees Incredible it's so blissful could take away the air you breath Take a glance around you and feel the mystical painting it draws Deserves an applause for many ways it leaves your eyes in awes Doesn't use a paint brush a pad it simply uses it's surroundings Tangles vines around trees leaving certain remarkable findings This is the portrait of life a daily picture that'll never depart Helps your insight rain snow fog mist all a beautiful art
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 Last edited by rule : 01-26-04 at 08:47 PM. |
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that was a prity good piece, i liked the way u described the different seasons and managed too keep it from being boring
"It's contagious I could stare at the mysterious eye candy all night An never feel I’ve had enough, It helps my ego..believe I’m alright" some people might think thats a bit soppy but i know how u feel , when i have a lot on my mind and i have a beer at night and there are lots of stars in the sky its relaxing to look at them and helps me think. vote on my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195 |
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IP: 1B3B C284
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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IP: 1B3B C284
okie...uppen...
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i thought this was pretty good, even tho i did the exact samesorta piece, months ago... but you took a slightly different angle to me.... quite interesting and different from some drops.... i liked it, and not just cos ive used it..lol..... return the favour on my latest...
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thanks...don't sleep...
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..I read this yesterday..i don't know why I didn't leave a feedback??....anyway..this was very good..your imagery was excellent..your wordplay was also great...i personally like the fall...
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thanks a lot...thats apreciated
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this is being slept on
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