hey ill drop it like that, like that?
when i do it like this you will scat boy
sittin and chillin after that, ill chat boy
A-Z-N represent and im still in it
ill spit it man ill split it man, and i ment it man
im mudd and muck cuz u knee deep in it man
destroy and devour you like asian with rice
yah im a tough guy but im still sorta nice
im cool as ice but im still pretty tight
like mice im hard to catch but i still rep
da A...Z...N till I Die yeah till death
and yes i will kill ya none the less
eatin eggrolls bitch u eatin some 2
not stuft with pork they stuft wit chu
ill murder cats stay fresh and clean
like outkast...
asian are nice but........ can be mean
soo diss the slanted eyes bitch dont matta
cuz if we roll thru.. shit i alredy hear ya teeth chatta

__________________
Nuff Said

up..

__________________
Nuff Said

^ errr... you need to elevate... quick....

you had no vocabulary, no multis, half your verse didnt rhyme, and for something as simple as "im the best" you couldnt stay on topic... all i can say is elevate

da A...Z...N till I Die yeah till death

dont use helper words... "yeah till death"... it makes you look like you couldnt think of anything else that rhymes

i agree you need to focus more on the topic... ya drifted a bit... and the scheme was very basic... start using some internals n multis... upp the vocab and be more expressive....

I'm asian my self..and this was very weak..your content was weak..vocab was worse..flow choppy..you need to elevate..peace..