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02-03-04, 09:05 PM | #1 | |
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jockyourself -vs- LyriCali Gifted
IP: F978 8610
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.:' no hate, d/r, crew votes .:' no biting .... = a d/q ~ good luck ~ |
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02-03-04, 09:07 PM | #2 | |
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go ahead and re-post your rap here, or make up a new one...dont matter to me, i will post in 30-40 minutes starting now...
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02-03-04, 09:48 PM | #3 | |
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With that pre-written-verse, i thought u'd be good..but u be-spittin-worse/1
fuckin faggot fuck, i'll leave u more 'cursed' then those three-wicked-words/2 Ya really dont wanna fuck with me, im infected with a lyrical-sickness/3 shit, the only time u been on a track it was for physical-fitness/4 jock, you just composed~a~catastrophy by spittin~your~blasphemy/5 I explode~wit~a~'masterpiece' that belongs~in~the~'art-gallery'/6 *swytch up* Preparin this sly spit tied with my shit that'll slit the wrist of this text drawn guy/7 Tried to call this a tie, nice try, lucky this battle aint 'real' or you die/8 I'll force feed jock anotha 'C-4' the way I 'bomb-ya-spits'/9 I ask 'who's-the-wackest' ya raise yer hand cus your 'anonymous'/10 jock is 'simply text', fuckin fake, tell me what 'audio-is-again'/11 told him we'd battle on stage, and this pussy 'packed-a-pen'/12 This fag is about To meat(meet) his end, and not in the way he hopes/13 jock cant cope, the only time ya drop 'hot bars', is when ur in prision dropping 'burning soap'/14 I'm Like 'Dandruff-Shampoos' I knock off this emcees 'head-and-shoulders'/15 Recieve as i decieve tha knife, cut you at 'knee level', and leave you 'de-calf-inated' like 'Folgers'**/16 HIS VERSE (note: he posted this in the Bitch Slapped, not knowing supposably that we were suppose to battle in here): ur boutta jock dis shit- dat i spit from my brain to my lips, its micah on dis mic an im rollin deep wit twenty fresh cripts, this is celeb poker an im the only one wit da exclusive blue chips, think befor u spit dont read ur shit straight from a script, i spit at dis crowd wit haf a blunt stringin from my mouth, afta i spit up- i speed like a demon on 101 south, back in da u.s. i hit dem streets, 22's on a cadi wit bass on my beats, five inch flat screen an guchi leatha seats, im da numba one emcee an i took ova ur city, an in dis rap race i jus lapped ur boy diddy, i got pity for u but love for ur effort an how hard u tried, but nex time dont hit punchlines that rant and don’t rhyme, i dont affiliate wit gangsters who flip burgers fo a livin, especially to those who are homosexually driven, dont spit bak cus either way im gonna be winnin, im through an dis shit is finished- an now i walk away grinin VOTES!! thanks!! |
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02-03-04, 11:13 PM | #4 | |
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IP: F978 8610
please vote!!!
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02-04-04, 01:52 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 92E3 012C
jockyourself (TIM HUGHES), nice verse, had me laughing,
had some decent punches, next time aim for da face not da stomach, srtructure was nice, good flow, easy to read ya know, next time throw some personals in their. gifted, aight verse, you had some punches, but they were weak dawg, just like i told him aim for da face, unlike most mcees, you actually through some multis in their, not to good structure, but keep elevating, holla. my vote:jockyourself hit up my battle (Genesis vs resse killah) hey TIM (DGK) |
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