hi nigger, fly nigger, gud bye nigger
that gurl has a fine figure
she likes me cuz my dick is bigger
than yours, open the doors
im cumin through
ne1 got a snooker cue
bash this mother fukin clown
my nigger got shot down
i giv da murderers da evil frown
me n me m8 will make them pay
they did it and they got away

here comes 1 big gay
beat him up his peices in a ash tray
bang bang bang now the nigger is down
now i get a crown
he was 1 of me crews enemies
i had him on his knees beggin please
that night i celebrated had a drink
got so pissed i beded this fit chink
the next day i was about to ask
but then she turned over and let me bang her up ass
now its the next day time to make other people hu mess pay
YO

^ another piece..that reminds me of..White Nigga..garbage..

reply please i wanna no wot u think

dripping with wack juice, first off, a topic helps give a purpose to the lyrics, and second, you need to elavte those lyrics something dire, you need regular length in your lines, use a beat to write to. add vocab and some multis or soemthing. but start with a topic.

fare enough

reply please just say woteva ya think

fukin reply

This wasnt that good here man.....your content needs work, write about something you like or something that you can relate to or something meaningfull to you...try adding some multies to it to make it better as well....but keep at it.