aight rules
5barz= 10lines
3-0 KO
5-votes wins
no crew
d/r
or hate votes

ill spit in a bit

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aigh man im down spit when u ready
luck
..........D

Fatal D a fat ass his cholestral is fatal he got them big double d’s/
Ive mastered a’s b’s and c’s cut of his knees and watch him fall wit e’s/
This dude is so big we call him that masta/
Instead of slim fast this dude needs slim fasta/

(aight enough playin around illmatic came to battle)

illmatics always commanding battles, so fatal d claimin he spittin hard get his fat mouth filled with sand and gravel/
fatal D he just stands and babbles, my allegiance-blinds plus whenever it's beef-we-shine like tanning cattle!/

go ahead and actually-spit, i drop ruthless-bowels this stupid-child wanna get abused-wit-vowels/
it's useless-now, cause iilmatics so quick ill take two free shots like shooting-fouls!/

illmatics got fat dudes and boobs rushing for some shine, turn-em-away burn-em-ablaze you must be out your mind/
when im busting from the nine, trust me im divine, punch fatal D in the chest so hard, my fist could take custody of your spine!!/

(finishin him off)

attack ur lungs leavin u internally-stressed, theres no scale to measure my skill i blow out rictors/
these lyrics are leavin u verbally-blessed, and fatal could’ve been born in a mexican household and still not come out a victor/

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oh shit i went ova tha bar or line limit shit
sry man iwas just typing my bad

well i did go first so u could feed of my verse

ur up spit

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who the fuck you think you are, saying shit that means nuthin
talking like a gangstar, im calling it, i no you bluffin
see D did his research, found out use a wack ass faggart
sits at home wearing slippers,sipping tea and watching taggart
and that shit that on the inernet(sheesh) dont get me started
some real shit shit man you more that just retarted.
stuttering every second, cant seem to get it out
how the fuck we spose to hear you wid your balls stuck in yo mouth

illmaticstatic where'd you get that from a comic book!! for fucks sake!!
to tell the truth you sound more like a cross dresser that belongs on ricki lake!!

5 bars exact i didnt run over
stayed in the limit
aight lets get some votes rollin in

yo n my shit wasnt pre written
bitch i no you coulnt write all that in that short time

yo i started typin in a word document when u accepted

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its aight man i was jus wondering
yo nice battle
..........d

Illmatic

Fatal D a fat ass his cholestral is fatal he got them big double d’s/
Ive mastered a’s b’s and c’s cut of his knees and watch him fall wit e’s/
Abc punches are played... they've been for awhile
This dude is so big we call him that masta/
Instead of slim fast this dude needs slim fasta/
What? wack

(aight enough playin around illmatic came to battle)
why say that?

illmatics always commanding battles, so fatal d claimin he spittin hard get his fat mouth filled with sand and gravel/
fatal D he just stands and babbles, my allegiance-blinds plus whenever it's beef-we-shine like tanning cattle!/
Not the greatest punch

go ahead and actually-spit, i drop ruthless-bowels this stupid-child wanna get abused-wit-vowels/
it's useless-now, cause iilmatics so quick ill take two free shots like shooting-fouls!/
Not bad... basketball personals are kinda played though

illmatics got fat dudes and boobs rushing for some shine, turn-em-away burn-em-ablaze you must be out your mind/
when im busting from the nine, trust me im divine, punch fatal D in the chest so hard, my fist could take custody of your spine!!/
Not a really good punch

(finishin him off)
Why u need to say that?

attack ur lungs leavin u internally-stressed, theres no scale to measure my skill i blow out rictors/
these lyrics are leavin u verbally-blessed, and fatal could’ve been born in a mexican household and still not come out a victor/
ok closing

Overall - take a trip to WEC and i can h elp you wit alot, your structure, flow, and punches need work... dont space ya bars, cut down ya lines, drop the / at the end, drop the --- inbetween words and drop the (finishing him off) crap


Fatal

who the fuck you think you are, saying shit that means nuthin
talking like a gangstar, im calling it, i no you bluffin
Meh.. no punch
see D did his research, found out use a wack ass faggart
sits at home wearing slippers,sipping tea and watching taggart
Blah.. faggart? not a good punch at all
and that shit that on the inernet(sheesh) dont get me started
some real shit shit man you more that just retarted.
blah.. not a direct punch
stuttering every second, cant seem to get it out
how the fuck we spose to hear you wid your balls stuck in yo mouth
think ive heard that before..or shit very close to it

illmaticstatic where'd you get that from a comic book!! for fucks sake!!
to tell the truth you sound more like a cross dresser that belongs on ricki lake!!
An actual punch this time

Overall - this was a very weak battle.. you both need to visit Wackness Emergancy Center and get help... but illmatic took it cuz he actually threw some punches

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Shit... I've been seein' some bad battles of late and this just continues that parade...
ABC shit is old and the fall wit e's shit reminds me of Fabolous (Wack)...Illmatic just rambled on aimlessly as well
Continuing on to Fatal D's "Awesome" (yeah right) verse, it doesn't get better. The Faggart and taggart sounded like I was reading the transcript for the Queer Eye Freestyle battles.... just never try that line. Ever.
There was a complete absence of punches in this battle... and I wasn't feelin' any flow.
::Sigh::
As much as I'd hate for any of you to actually start thinkin' your good, I do have to give this to Illmatic. You both sucked, but there was a pulse comin' from Illmatic (Far from ill).
Visit the WEC.... cuz your W-A-C-K

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Fatal D-
"illmaticstatic where'd you get that from a comic book!! for fucks sake!!
to tell the truth you sound more like a cross dresser that belongs on ricki lake!!"
--->>that was sik, id say you took the win here. nicely done

yo uppin for votes
needing some input here
thnx..........D

Bleh... this wasnt a very good battle... both need to elevate greatly on punches and structure....

Neither really had good punches, or flow.... some of the lines were a bit stretched... overall illmatic hit with more punches, and he actually had some multies which is good.... both need to improve your vocab and use some personals... also fix up your structure so that all lines are equal....

and illmatic, dont use the (finishing him off) type crap... its not needed

vote - illmatic

hit this link up for me with an honest vote... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109734

damn i was koed o well good battle
nice verse
luck to ya crew holla at me sum time .........D