In the Beginning.....

it all started bout 2 months back wen i had nobody
then this girl came along and she was somebody
i told her that i liked her alot and she said it back
then people said i was using her jus to get her in the sack
but them didnt no shit i really liked this one
going into a realtionship not noing wether it was serious or abit of fun
i found out she had a boyfriend hes name was ben!!!
i started to get my doubts. but then i thought im probably two ov him

Wednesday 10th of december....

i went home with her after college wiv two of our mates
I couldnt get through to her propely she was like a closed gate
i remember going to kiss her jus to see if she would reply
she wudnt do anything wiv me then i rememberd she wernt even mine
so i thought to myself ive got to try and split up her and ben. but HOW.
so i waited for the right moment to kiss her and that moment was now
i got what i wanted that night i didnt want it to end
it was amazing she even split up wiv her boyfriend.
i was happy now i new i was winning this love race
i left her house that night with a smile upon my face.

Friday 12th of december....

i met her at college and asked if i could go home with her just me and you
my heart was raceing for the answer. but she wanted me to..
back at her house that night everything was tense
she was like a closed gate again so i decided to climb the fence.
i asked her out that night and she sed yes.
thinking this relationship waz gona last was just a bad guess
she had moments when she would just lie there and just think
she wouldnt tell me what she waz thinking about so id just throw her a wink


Saturday 13th of december

i met her from work that night cuz thats the kind of man i am
not noing what i was getting myself into but i guess that was my bad..
her mom and her moms boyfriend over the past couple of days seemed kinda nice
but i didnt really no them. i mean id only met them twice.
so we got back to her house her parents wernt even there.
i acted like that was a bad thing but my brain was saying. "HELL YEAH"
she kept telling me she really liked me. And her and ben were over and done
But ben was the least ov my problems cuz then the clock struck 1
her parents came back and they were really drunk
u could smell the alcohol her moms boyfriend stunk
when he came up to us we were like food and he had the munches
then he wanted to fight me so i was gona throw some punches
but i didnt i stoped i didnt wana hit him cuz things would of got bad
but as im sitting here writing this shit i wish i had

Sunday 14th of december

she kept apologizing for last night and her parents actions
she said she'd understand if i wanted us to finish but i didnt lose the attraction
she was perfect for me we even went cinemas that night
we enjoyed our selves the film was tight.

Monday 15th of december

i neva saw her all that day. i was just texting her
everything seemed ok!!!
but then she texted me wiv the words that she didnt wana be with me.
somet about her old boyfriend. it felt like she had been leading me.
so i thought i wouldnt fall out with her. i pretended like i understood
i wanted to confront her about it but i never could.

The End.....

so anyways the reason why im writing this shit
i feel like my hearts been torn out and then someone trod on it
she told me that she didnt wana boyfriend for a while
but now i find out that she might get back with ben he better run a mile.
cuz wen i find him im gona pummle his ass
then make people tred on his heart and make him feel like trash
the man is a dick how can he steal my girl like that
ill just tell everyone i wana see him just to chat
everyone went on like i loved her but im just a kid
but now i think about it.......
MAYBE I DID......

iight...

this werent bad to be honest... flow was off in many places... and ive seen this structure before {Penskillz}... lol... but yea... it was pretty good... could relate to it n that... you have improved since your first drop, which was shit... this wasnt that bad...

keep elevating... pz

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u broke up a happy couple??U are officially a hater.Good drop though, stop saying "werent" though say 'Wasn't'

Yeah i agree this was alright here man....you had some emotion in this....as i was reading this i honestly could relate to this in most ways due to recent things that has been occuring in my life and somethings in the past...but overall man i liked this, and keep at it.

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It was aight...long...no...I mean loong...naw hold up...I mean llooonnnggg. Getting tired of reading about guys who probably tell they boys that they the man and they letting females run over them like this. Sorry about that one (not you in specific) but get a pair (for some of you). Anyway, you got off a couple of times, but made it easy to get back on. Decent.

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