aight, 10 lines, no feeding.
i set it up, u spit first. got it?

check in, then spit.

U Call Yoself Matt-matt//
But If U Meet Me U Be Meetin A Baseball Bat//
And I Hate To Have To Be So Rude//
But When Im Battlin A Faggit I Have No Choice But To Beat This Dude//
And U Can Say What U Want//
But When I Lift Up My Shirt U Better Duck Cuz Des Bullets Gona Hurt//
I Anit A Killa//
But U Will Get Merked//
I'll Chop Yo Body Up Then U Will Get Served//
To The Fiends On My Block Where They Like Tha Work//
And The Semi-automatic Left U A Stick Cuz Yo Body Got Jerked//
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I Guess This Kid Got Afraid//
I Know My Rhymes Would Blow Him Up Like Sum Type Of A Gernade//
Butt Somebody Sholda Told This Nigga//
When I Spit My Rhymes They Will Would Fold This Nigga//
I Hate To Have To Do It But My Bullets Will Unload On U Nigga//
Dislocating Ya Head From Ya Shoulder Nigga//
And I Know U Don't Wanna Show Up Nigga//
Cuz My Rhymes Got U Shakin And Shivering Nigga//

my flow is so hurtful and KEEN makin you feel awkaward
the last capitalized adjective is your signature backward
but im not here just to make creative word jumbles
im here to slit your nizzie so deep your throat crumbles
ill pull your head back using your own hair
your neck opens up like what you use to spit your wack air
i open it up enough to look down your esophagous
seein nothin but female organs during this unofficial autops
starting to feel guilty cause youre so young or YNG
so i end your suffering, and change your abreviation to RIP

you cant post twice retard, i was waitin on your ass to post in the right battle.

uppin' 1x........... please vote (people with 100+ posts) thanks.

Its About Time I Finally Battled Some One What Do U Think Of My Rhymes I Know I Aint The Best But I Just Started At This

uppin' 2x........... please vote (people with 100+ posts) thanks again!

nizzle

U Call Yoself Matt-matt//
But If U Meet Me U Be Meetin A Baseball Bat//
Right... try to be more complex
And I Hate To Have To Be So Rude//
But When Im Battlin A Faggit I Have No Choice But To Beat This Dude//
U wanna bat a faggit? as in literally beat him and stick ya hands on his skin
And U Can Say What U Want//
But When I Lift Up My Shirt U Better Duck Cuz Des Bullets Gona Hurt//
Didnt rhyme
I Anit A Killa//
But U Will Get Merked//
Dont rhyme
I'll Chop Yo Body Up Then U Will Get Served//
To The Fiends On My Block Where They Like Tha Work//
And The Semi-automatic Left U A Stick Cuz Yo Body Got Jerked//
Blah closer

Overall - You need some serious elevation, take a trip to wackness emergancy center and il help u beter your punches...they need serious work


Matt

my flow is so hurtful and KEEN makin you feel awkaward
the last capitalized adjective is your signature backward
Not the greatest rhyme, ok punch
but im not here just to make creative word jumbles
im here to slit your nizzie so deep your throat crumbles
wordplay... not bad
ill pull your head back using your own hair
your neck opens up like what you use to spit your wack air
Meh..not that good
i open it up enough to look down your esophagous
seein nothin but female organs during this unofficial autops
not feeling it, since 6 lines have been about his throat
starting to feel guilty cause youre so young or YNG
so i end your suffering, and change your abreviation to RIP
Alittle bit of word play, not a bad ending

Overall - you had some alright wordplay and some ok punches

My vote - mat, he came harder wit punches, he had some word play and personals and his flow was much better

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Matt_matt took this pretty easily. He actually had some worthwhile punches. Nothing great, but yng cam mad played and whack. Dun worry, elevation comes with time and experience. Peace
Know yall can't vote, but drop an opinion here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881

mattx2 took this one no doubt. nizzie really work on your structure cuz that is fucking up your throw...also your punches didnt really hit/connect at all. mattx2...pretty good verse im impressed...work on PUNCHING....your punches all connected nicely...but the punchlines werent so agressive...stray away from violent references and focus on something a little more clever....good vesre though and i was feeling some of your lines. good verse,....your flow was right on beat and everything went smoothly. just work on the agression level of your punches...making them surprising and whitty.

vote: mattx2

YO THIS BATTLE NEEDS TO ELEVATE A LIL........BUT IT WAS OK FOR NEWB'S......BUT MY VOTE GOES TO MATT-MATT HE HAD SOME ACTUAL PUNCHES THAT HAD MY GIGGLIN......BUT...OTHER WISE IT WAS A EVEN BATTLE
VOTE-MATMAT

HIT THIS UP....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545

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matt matt, good shit, good punches, you needed a
couple more, the slicing your throat line was dope dawg,
nice flow, aight structure, but needs work, next time
throw some personals in their dawg.

nizzie, aight verse, you had some decent punches, you
need to make some harder punches, aight flow, not to good,
structure, you also have to throw some personals in their to
dawg, you aint gonna win just off of decent punches.

my vote: matt matt

hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109111

matt took this one pretty easy, he had some good punches and structure. youve already improved a lot since your first battle which is really cool to see. you stopped trying to overcomplicate everything and your lines match up a lot more. my vote definitely for matt_matt

guys please come check my first battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109787

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