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02-02-04, 03:44 PM
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Audio..Till Its All Over!
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Anything For U...Finished Song
IP: 5502 12A2
This iS How It Go's
1st Verse:Me Hook:Koffe 2nd Verse:Me Hook:.... 3rd Verse:Me Hook... Hook... this is a love song towards a girl .....i felt it...leave feedback on what u think about the song..thanks... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/hypnotist.htm |
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02-02-04, 04:42 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: B4AC 694E
Flow is very shakey, as you can see on the first 2 bars:
"I love you so much, theres a little i hate, since the day we met......i knew it was fate" You had to pause at "met", to stay on beat, and im not talking about the normal pause between bars or what not. Thats the main problem in this, the delivery and slow needs work. "cause i love you as much as i cannn" see you rushed that bar in also. Just tryin to point things out for you to work on. .OnE HuNeD'.
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 .Soul-Full Beats. Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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