6-12 lines.no feeds.house rules.

you start.

30 mins.

U fuck around with me u better realize u can stop me
U think im comin weak just cause your comin cocky
Don’t mock me top chop me like your rocky
Rappin on the net actin like a vet
Thinking your on point so I smack u in the head
Your wrist slit bitch are u gettin it now
your pussyin out Cause I rippin ya now
I wreck minds best lines with my text rythmes
Thinking you’re the best but u no tupac or no techn9ne
Your best rythms wouldn’t weakin my ways on my worst day
Im wicked and explicit you’re a witness to my wordplay

30 mins dawg.

Ideal, isnt that a R&B group that broke up and got the boot?
Im glad that your typing, cause if I heard you, i'd hit Mute.
Compute: Your score minus one, what does that equal?
You dying in round one, and next comes the sequel.
Marques Houston from Ideal, is that your name,
Hittin' high notes and vocals, but ur rap is lame.
I must be numb, I can't feel your affection.
Your lines are lame, your rhymes need some correction.
Posters of Ideal on ur wall, giving u a hard on erection.
My direction is to expose you, like a food inspection.
Rejection? That fits well in your collection
Of wack ass rhymes that you try and derive from my projection.

Comparing Tupac with Techn9ne? They aren't even in the same league bro.

i didnt compare i just simply placed both there names in the spit never once was i comparing them to anyone but u

Jay go post in our battle yo!! it''s been up i posted the deadline shuld be up already. I'll vote on this now though. next post

ideal, where is your structure. ur rhymes are kinda wack and have no scheme. J-Dilla you analyzed this guy preety good. id say you take the win.

j took this easy, i dont even need to type anything else. like wow. ideal sucks.
but hey, just keep at it, youll get better. and j, too much on the rnb group ideal, but it was a good call.

aight...ideal nice structure and flow, good scheme, kinda sounded like a freestyle thouh and you didn't have very hard disses. J-dilla nice flow and scheme, good structure, you came out swingin threw some punches not real hard ones either but harder then ideal's. vote-j-dilla

fav line ideal-
aight not bad, good flow, and we no hell no he aint neither one of them..lol

fav line j-dilla-
hmm, nice wrdplay, good flow, not a bad punch

overall: both had good flow, vocab and schemes, but the harder punches is what wins battles, and j had them. Ideal try to use some more punches in ya spit, do sum homework if u have to get sum personals cuz they help allot.

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