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Rhythmic Mechanics(featuring Pheoniix)
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Yo..this shit might rust quick..you know..we spitting it so good..fucking created Frankenstein
Pheoniix: A struggle to even mutter a word over automatic mechanics A complexly assembled rhythm of wistfully clashing metallics A low key, steady vibration...the generator's hum.... The reliable spin of centrifical lifts...elicit momentums Circular geared gadgets...crafted from lasting plastics.. Holds groove in two new ways... .....................................when properly used: fantastic A fine point to scrape and in place plays embracement... ...of the digested meshing message of a pefect tonal placement Like a hidden basement of wasteless creative containment But still consider it limitless... .........................................endless manifest destination It plays greatness...and holds weight for the weightless Enables great brains to escape pain and say shit Electrodes deny erosion...explode in unknown modes of devotion Potent serotonin...the chemical benefit of mental motion But the release exceeds needs of reaching unrealistic dreams Cuz if we can still release....then we will continue to breathe So for those who scorn advancement and in turn dub it restless Realize the connection... We all are feeling and breathing robots... .................................................. ......of our own invention Wise Ways: Conforming two magnets.. Stick'n together technology from massively advanced planets & adding two tangents are eqautions to rhythmic mechanics Codes spoken in latin & spanish..set'n standards that appeal Intertwining metal reels..into gears mixed with nerves & steel Creating shit that feels... ...........................touches & tastes, with facial expressions Robots giving memorable mentions..in this place of inventions Solid extensions made from wrenches & screws forming truth ...& No proof of a consience..which puts good & evil to use You take tha consumption of free will..then u get corruption & Even throw away garbage dump-in's..lets out combustion Spontanious acts not even worked by twisting gages..paces Back & forth through tha trenches & seems of manual pages Revolving back to tha basics..melting molten metal in fusion Transparantly oozing out tha sides of crucibles.. .............................................Creat ing imperfect illusions Covered in grease & oil..cuz thats a robots only camoflauge .....All Configured odds & ins..engeniusly built in a cars garage Constructed evenly throughout.. pistons & cables for bones Instead of veins inside..theres traveling wires, plated with crome Metal threads weaving and sown..making rhymes that do damage With ceramics combining ya canvas..duplicating .................................................. these rhythmic mechanics Yeah muthafuckas..except theres no power button...expect more..... |
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02-02-04, 02:40 AM | #2 | |||
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alright this piece was pretty good,
Complaints.. your flow was off because you would use such big words.. and trying to sound as complex as hell threw it off a bit for me.. Smiley Faces.. you had no lack of vocab, and your imagery was kept constant throughout, you both came with really good pieces that complimented eachother very well
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02-02-04, 02:51 AM | #3 | |||||||
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No doubt you both did well together and stayed on point the whole time...i didnt think the flow was too bad but it wasnt great.... nice vocab, complex shit, dope drop both of you...
hit up my keystyle or one of my battles plz
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02-02-04, 03:26 PM | #4 | |||
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Thank you.........
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02-02-04, 07:15 PM | #5 | ||||||
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I am "upping" this thread in hope for a bit of "feedback."
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02-02-04, 10:42 PM | #6 | |||
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Sheesh...
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02-03-04, 01:31 AM | #7 | ||||||
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^serious.
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02-03-04, 11:27 AM | #8 | |||
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^you're right
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02-03-04, 11:39 AM | #9 | ||||||||
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aiight...the collab was starit fire, the vocab was there, complexity, n yall both stayed on point n spit to de fullest..tho yall used big words that threw off ur floww..it still sounded good, so i give props to de both o yall n keep spittin shit
if u can ..please return de favor n drop feedback on mine-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845 Peace
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02-03-04, 03:56 PM | #10 | ||||||
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rap it out loud to yourself....flow is on? i thought so.
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