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its hard to believe you 14 and already labeled as kuniva
this dude is weak probably a broad should call this pussy vagina
he soft as charmin when its wet so i'll go through him like bullet holes
My flow be ammo when i spit leave you shot up and bleedin in hos-pi-tolls
Shouldn't call me out learn to keep michael corleone off your tongue.
i'll give you a reprieve from you mistake cause you so fuckin young.
listen to ya daddy cause i been fuckin ya mom since round 82.
but then again, you might not be, she was fuckin ten other niggas i knew.
this muthafucka shouldn't have stepped up, like ugly girls, to fuck with me
he too stupid and too young. 14 and this kid aint passed grade level 3.
you just a nother misguided colorado youth like them boys in little-ton.
tired of life and me banging ya mother so you run up like jackers with no guns.

never mind to the private message i just sent you

aiyyo because your older, and cause ur in made men
doesnt mean u got more eperience, i been rappin since age ten
im sorry but i think that when im twenty three
i wont battle, ill have a job wit a salary
and to say im like those mothafuckaz in columbine
now im pissed if u wanna see a slaughter than "YALL" in time
yo, i know im attractive but its up to YOU to keep MichaelCorleone off my tounge
and thank god im under 18, cause thats rape when im that young
lets to the math mike, umm... grade level 3
yeah im only a freshman, but soon ill take the SAT
i dont even need to go the full fourteen lines
hey mike u should go again, heres the green light

mistake in line two, should be experience not eperience

uppin (#1)

c'mon guyz, please vote on this, i would really like for my first battle to be a win(#2)

dont fall asleep on this please, good first time battle for me(#3)

yo that was an aight battle but can any
of yall hook a brotha up wit some votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111515

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111495

and my vote goes to kuniva cause he had way better punch lines
and real good stucture i see lots of word play in this charicter

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ur the only one out of the three of us that can vote, so vote on this thread please, i would vote if i could

no, no, no, no, no, M.C. shadow, ur vote is gonna get deleted, u didnt give enough info as to why i won and Mikey lost (5) more votes please, dont let this battle get slept on

mad played out rhymes w/ the soft as charmins, and jackers wit no guns lines. what i read from this battles it was close, but damn da things kaniva said in his uppins. u faught a complete pussy here.
vote- michael cus da other guys real weak

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weak as fuck battle!!...mike u had an ok flow, and structure, couple disses but nuthin too hard, also the moms shit is played out. kuniva u ahd an ok structure, the flow was lilchoppy, diss comebacks were weak as hell, u both needa elevate. but my vote-michael

cuz he came with more punches no need to break it down.

peep my battle in the sig and vote
thanks

thats ok ppduece cause u didnt give adequate feedback, so soon that vote wont matter anymore