10 - 12 lines

45 mins to spit after check in

no dr
no crew
no feedin
no bullshit

good luck.

checkin in

This battle be our first n last, cause we already know Im the winner,
Plus your easily beat, like takin your slut mother out for dinner,
Reading my verse, I know that this kids jealous,
So I dispose of him like empty jars of relish,
The only way this kids gettin votes is if he gets on his knees,
Even then his other RB names will make him say please,
Your like a disease, Im the medicine gettin rid of you wit ease,
This kids just annoying, like having yo eye filled wit flea's,
This kid gets easily ripped, out his fucking stomach comes his intestines,
Even if this wannabe rapper owned a bank he still couldnt invest lines,

Fuck this battle I'm a verbal attack pistol
I pull the trigger and I fuck up your grizzle(grill)
Put away the keyboard got to Mcdonalds your hired
You posted one to many bad rhymes its time you retired
I'll rip out and sell internal organs from head to toe
Then we'll change your name to true-I-sold-ja-hoe
So your the True-Soul-DJ-A
Dog who spins soul vinyls, your fuckin gay
If you get a vote it's because of higher forum status
This battle's a plane I'm throwin you out with no parachute aparatus
Killah, the flowin cannible, I eat humans alive with my words
I'm a break your spine, by battlin me you put your mouth on this curb

spit urs soon

whoops

Uppin#1...........................................

Vote





Plz

vocab - reese
personalz - reese
flow - true
wordplay - reese
multi - none
vote - reese

plz return the favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623

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Uppin #2

this battle was aight but can u hook a brutha up wit some votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110581

Vote here begger

hit this with a vote

Uppin #2 c'mon why is no1 votin on this battle

Stop lookin at stats and give an honest vote based on verse