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Fatal ur lyriks make me delirious
readin ur spits from tha above dis
got me thinkin you werent serious
ur a flyweight son ill slaughter u
n make ur momma com admit
her retarded ass addobted u
i fathered u n left u on a train
i said how could i keep this kid
hes bound to be insane
grow up to fuckin ur own sister
now ur playin games
eveyone say fag u say please i prefer mister
dister after i knocked her up
ur momma an ugly bitch that was drunk as fuck
so to give you some hope of winnin this bat
ill give u anything son im ur dad

Cycotic My Rhymes Are Insane More THen Psycho..||
With This K.O I Take THis Like Ali With One Blow..||
If YO Rhymes Were Attached With Strings It Still Woudnt Hang..||
He Tryin Slang If He Was A Pretender He Still Wouldnt Be In The WU-Tang Clan..||
You My Dad....Last Time I Checked I Was engaged With Yo MOM..||
Stay Calm.. Even Thou I Drop Bombs.. Leave Ya Body Rottin In Vietnam..||
He Claim He Is Webter But He Aint Got A Definition..||
This Is My Mission..And Like WWE SupaStars I Leave Ya In A Submission..||
I Aint PLayin games Im Not Takin It Serious..||
Like CourtTV I Leave Ya Body Mysterious..||
I Should Be In Amerias Most Wanted Cuz Already Ive Buried You Twice..||
You Claimin You Dead... But I Havnt Made YO Brain Go Slicce..||
I Got Him Not Breathin Causin Suffocation..||
Again And Again Body No Where To Be FOund Cant Find The Location..||
If Your Hands Were Glued On The Bat You Still Woudnt Have Grip..||
I AInt Prepared...When Im Fully Equipped..||
One MOre Line This Is YOur Last Battle That You Will Have..||
I Take This 2 And Crack it In Half..||

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both verse sucked!! slim u'r flow wa sweak, u;r disses were dumb didn't have any punches really. fatal u'r flow was fucked up u had sum vocab but the punches were weak as well, nuthin really hit but u came more creative...so vote-fatal

Slim woork on the punches, just spit harder shit that wuld make people laugh when were readin it, or drop some more personals.

peace

Here's how it goes.

Flow=tie, you both need to work on your flows a little bit

Punches=Fatal, his hit a little harder, and his were more I guess distinguishable as punches.

Personals=Tie, I have to say that neither really had any personals, both need to work on that.

Vocab=Fatal, Slim your vocab was pretty basic, both need to work on this as well. But Fatal had some vocab in there.

Over all=Fatal, both of you keep working and you should improve.

slim cykotic was v week.Fatal_Lyrikkz came a lot harder and had beta flow.Both elvauate.nice verse frm Fatal_Lyrikkz tho.
Vote:Fatal_Lyrikkz (was purly a lot beta)
Return da fava:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

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3-0 Fatal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Still Uppin

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yea they were both shit, but a much better performance by fatal
he actually threw punches that cnnected
slim cykotic, umm there is nothing to say but, um read a dr. suess book,
it is bound to be more creative and rhyme better than you!!
punches flow, strucutre, rhymes made sense,
it all goes to fatal
so fatal congrats to your first win, consider yourself a dynasty soldier!!

v/ fatal lyrikkz

r u aware that this isnt a poll battle? so u might not get a win, you have to add a poll!!

Yea Ice But i DIDNT MAKE THIS HE DUD

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