Now I'm a smoker and let me be perfectly honest ....
Death! ... is a ciggerette's only werthy promise ....
I say blaze the chronic ... but not on a constant ...
Dont get too tho lazy works like your life's deposit ...
Watch it...get to friendly wit Mary you should stop it
Funny how crops get ...ppl who sellin'em to the tropics ...
Tobacco companies find us...then they just blind us ....
Impresionable kids and them executives is all liars!!
Dont even smoke themselves yet they still take life
It hits personal too just took my friend's late wife ....
They take rights...each the same why even make Lights??
Mistakes bright like the spark when smoke takes flight
But even I'm a fuckin hipocrit I just smoked one ....
Already coughin sick as hell with somethin like a broke lung...
Box after box we roast some and they just poach funds
A pack a day in a week's like what a winter coat runs...
I wish I could retract ... the first time I untaped a pack
I swear to God if I could I'd definitely take it back ....
Newport just wants your fuckin money its a naked fact ...
But the stakes is whack, life fades fast when you lightin that
15 minutes disappears in'a plant wrapped in paper Please!
Your life can't even get that fucked up from smokin weed....
Cigs we know leave you broke indeed ...but we toast in need
Addicted quick like speed...makin it hard as shit to breathe ...
I used to have stamina ... used to run track on the mile tip ...
Next I'm hittin' up Wawa on that Malboro Mild tip ....
Even the cowboy killers ... Reds is what I started on ...
Now I'm on Newports dead like the rest the retarded pawns ...
Signed a contract with the grim reaper the day I met Nicotine ...
Still spit on the mic tho you might say I'm the sickest feen...
Quick to dream ... fuck the crop it figures I picked the cream ...
Ripped & leaned stripped of green ... let me depict the scene...
Blaze a Newp after toke'in that blunt, supposedly gets you higher
But the taste it gives you makes you find the supplier....
We keep comin back knowin' the final consequence remindin' us ...
Tombstone with vowels & constinents the last sign of us ....
To quit is more than kinda tough ... thats my kinda luck ...
A death certificate by Cigs & evidently it's signed by Chuck(me of cousrse)
So our next generation Tobacco companies sayin "Line'um Up"
Hope they cant find enough...poor souls so earth LIvens up
Be safe, smokin these fuckin cancer sticks is plain foolish ...
I was duped to, started smokin at first to acheive coolness
But after the first time I pulled it ..I was hooked the coolest
Changes took to formin' ............ bringin' nothin but bullshit
And I sit alone at night wishin to travel with the light
Go back to that first night and better my entire life....
Woulda said No to peer pressure ... a beer on my dresser...
Only 12 and still pimpin the chic let me undress her ....
But that was after she passed me a Newport ..... figures ...
We need'a show tobacco sales some short figures...
Take control of our destiny ... let's pilot the cock pit ...
If you smokin a cig and readin this fuckin Stop It!!
Blood clotted ... doctor says cancer's spotted ....
Body & lungs rotted, , thas what i get for my million dollars?!?!?!
I'm not the only one and we all know the feeling ...
Your whole days gone bad and your mind is just reeling ...
You fall back on your dependancies like I do all the time...
But I start showin a little Independency within this rhyme !...
This is my start ... to a clean finish ... I'm gonna win it ...
Smoke another ciggerette after this last pack? FORGET IT...
I quit .. I'm done puffin -one- ... I'm done fuckin lungs
Theres a ladder where I'm comin from, time to go up the rungs..
Now my mouth shut and stung ... now I'll just find a slut and son
She wont smoke niether cuz I want my seed to be a healthy one..
Im'a be wealthy son! ....Listen to the "Truth" ... they dont lie ...
In every commercial just picture you were the one who Died!!



i guess i'm done.....lol......holla......

Damn this is dope, keep it up I aint got the time to review just wanted to say I am almost done with my written and it kind of touches this subject but dont think im bitin your style or nothin cos i started writin way before i read this....but chea 8/10 at least this is some ill stuff

__________________

thanks up.

__________________
<Center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>.:Corrupted Visions:.</table></Center>

nice drop.
though its kind of a funny concept for a rap song, it would make a tight audio because of the rhymes. serioulsy, you're great with words on that one. nice job.

hit up my collab wit wise ways

uoppppppppppppppppppp

__________________
<Center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>.:Corrupted Visions:.</table></Center>

fucking hell, this was well too long,

nice drop though,
nice immagery, a nice concept, an your getting better with every drop you do!!

you shouldn't of revealed you alias though

__________________
<center><img src=http://www.rhymevantage.com/forum/attachment.php?s=&postid=6921=1 border=0></center>

^ dont matter........i only battle with tech...........and who else would be named Meks??

__________________
<Center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>.:Corrupted Visions:.</table></Center>