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my bad i left somewhere, bain was supposed to post it for me..he forgot my bad man.....
here it is

Lyrics thinks he’s good, this fag is wrong, anyone’s better-then-this-dame
I don’t need to tell his future, cause its told by the first letter-in-his-name
Its funny, This kid claims-I-suck, when all his wins came-from-luck
Sorry to tell u but your sig will remain the same-u-fuck* (free agent, he wont get picked)
I’m new yet u had to test-me-first? U think I suck, jus check-my-verse
Your death is in these 10 lines, I don’t even need my tek-to-burst
U should expect-the-worst, cause lyrics-is-trash, my skill…u should fear-it-u-ass
‘Cause if your lyrics come from the soul,’ you need a ‘spiritual-class’/ (get it?)
Now I’m not aggressive, but u jus felt obligated to open-your-trap
And your friends were only joking when they said you were chosen-to-rap…..

k spittin ASAP.............................................. ..........................

Your sig says you 'consummate', maybe towards imperfection
Multi::Talented? Maybe...but ya goin in the wrong direction
Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented...
This kids at the highest point of perfection?..........................
.................................................W ell i jus threw him down
Your punches were off, ya lines were played,........................
.................................................. ..and I'm jus clownin now
I'm bagging this kid easily, cause he acting fiesty.......kinda funny
Punches penetrate so far in his chest he like a ventriliquist dummy
Battles finished you got merked, ya suck now accept ya loss
Cause like public education...son...I schooled ya at no cost

uppin #1. Drop a vote and leave a link

"Lyrics thinks he’s good, this fag is wrong, anyone’s better-then-this-dame
I don’t need to tell his future, cause its told by the first letter-in-his-name"

pretty tight multi. i gotta give you that...

"Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented"

was very tight, and complex but still came accross.

i liked lyric's punches and connections more in this one.

i gotta give it to him...

vote: lyric

i THINK LYRIC TOOK THIS..CUZ HE PLAYED OFF YA NAME REAL BAD..AN IT KILLED U MT.SHIT THIS WAS ONE OF THE FINER BATTLES IVE PEEPED ALL DAY..BUT I THINK LYRIC TOOK THIS HANDS DOWN GOOD SHIT FROM U BOTH..
SEE U CATS ARE ELEVATINSHIT...

vOTE-LYRIC..

PEEP THE LNIK BOTH U CATS.PLZ.ITS cLOSE..I HIT YA SHIT UP..HIT MINE PC
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110068

uppin #2. PLease hit this up

think lyric took thiz, he had a better structure and vocabulary... he had ok punchez while some of mt were kinda wack...
vote - lyric

return the favour plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377

uppin #3. Please drop an honest vote here guys.

The slightly better punches where for Lyric..
Good verse, vocabulairy & well structured..
Multi had slight stretched lines & the-shit-is-wack..
So for basically a better battle verse..
Lyric

Punches: Lyric
Wordplay: Lyric
Multis: Multi
Personals: Multi
opener: Lyrics
Closer: Lyrics

Vote - Lyric

Punches penetrate so far in his chest he like a ventriliquist dummy
Best line of the battle.

Multis verse was pretty good too, just use more punches, or just more effective ones.

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uppin #4. Please drop a honest vote here

Here we go last uppin, drop a honest vote here guys.