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No hater, dickriding or crew votes
Spit first-no time limit
Relax and take your beatin like a man

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checkin in. im writin a KEYSTYLE though. is that alrite wit u. if u dont want to thats aiight

You must be on the can the way you spit
Cause you “drop” lines like a pile a-shit
I spit nice raps, too hot for mics, I melt ice caps
Like a fast food, cats love my taste, while your styles from
the internet copy and paste, so site that before you write back
It’s a “Given” I hit him wit danger rhythms, don’t get caught for plagiar-ism
Lyrical Method, stuck on his own “procedure”
When he kno the “conclusion” of this battle, he hav-ing seizures
Cause my “hypothesis” is always right
Support your rhymes wit stats (a.k.a. “data”) if you wanna prove you nice
So if you wanna “deliver”, you better be faster than the Pizza guy
If you was any weaker you’d be Jesus Christ…

You don't spit hot shit, your rhymes just hot shit
you to small to battle me , you ain't even a object
i know why you disrespect
its b/c you lack intellect
my verbs wreck your mind, im bout to win unanimously for my second time
line after line as you read you go blind
cuz my rhymes not the illest, when you really reading it
yo can't help but feel this
no listen up rookie, you trying to flow hard, play god
we all know you soft like ah marsh
i bet you get no hoes, you get no blows(blunts),cuz u gots no flows
your light don't shine, your mom is crying
cuz you ready catcha lost and i ain't even trying
once again im LyricalMethod a.k.a DaMessenger
im stressin ya cuz my lyrics keep blessin ya
i flow hard like lava, and you wonder your girl want to slide up inside her
and stealin rhyme sis not my motive
i'll make it to the top like mexicans on the status quota
im far from the best, but my rhymes cut through your lyrical vest
and for the record dude you ain't nice, you just ahnother patient under my knife

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We're now taking votes, be real honest aight. I need that constructive criticism.

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this was a ass battle...<<<constructive critiscm...well not constructive just an ass battle ok heres the criticsm...mike what the hell did u drop i mean stop and think before u write i think i saw 1 hott bar u need to come harder people do have skills on this board...u had good flow and some wordplay but overall your battle lacked in almost every area overall...

mike: 4.5/10

ok LM u had an ass verse too i mean come on people need to stop sleepin on other people here...but i have to say u did have 3 nice punches...and a lil bit of wordplay and multies but overall u didnt interest me in any way but i think u did better than mike and u get my vote

LM: 5.5/10

vote:LM...although both of u came weak i think LM took this with more punches that hit and a lil better wordplay OK shyt from both but elevate and show people u aint no joke

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ite both ya'll really need to step up wit this stuff, decent flow from both ya, but neither or ya had punches or wordplay

LM "i bet you get no hoes, you get no blows(blunts),cuz u gots no flows
your light don't shine, your mom is crying"
turn that into a punch usin wordplay makin it sound cool by sayin sumin like,

u blowin smoke up your butt, like u got a blunt up it,
still no punches come out, cuz u and this battle i jus double fucked it

sumin like that, or sumin simple, like u blow less then an unlit blunt, but imma face this bitch more then a licked cunt.

face- goin up against someone and eatin a girl out. das wordplay B, and that simple one, call something of his sumthing then say wats wrong wit this, your punches are an unlit blunt cuz they dont blow.

shits pretty simple, jus think about them next battle, but this one imma give it to
lyricalmethod. cuz flow was the only thing really i could judge on cuz thats the only thing ya'll really had, but he had more. so....
vote- lyricalmethod

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flow both were mad weak tie both were bad m work on ur structure lm work on ur rhymin
vocab i guess lm he had like 3 big words uut both still need work
punches l lm were played and he fed so im gonna give it 2 l with a beter all around verse wprk on the things i said above and elevate

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mike:
good wordplay but ur lines didnt really rhyme kinda wack man
keep elevating work on better punches and metas and structure

worstline:the internet copy and paste, so site that before you write back
It’s a “Given” I hit him wit danger rhythms, don’t get caught for plagiar-ism
Lyrical Method, stuck on his own “procedure”
^^^ just a tiny bit wack
keep workin
best line:You must be on the can the way you spit
Cause you “drop” lines like a pile a-shit
use better vocab and make thosew punches stronger
overall *6*
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lyrical
nice verse good opunches but u need to also step up
worst line:your light don't shine, your mom is crying
cuz you ready catcha lost and i ain't even trying
<^>
theres alot more man some of ur shit was wack work on ya structure aight
overall *6*
ur shit didnt rhyme good either i give it to him just cuz ur bad structure thats what lost is for u
my vote mik12
peace

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It wasent a very good battle, but id have to go with method for harder punches and better wordplay, but you both should work on your structure and rhyming

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Yo Dis A Fuckin Wack Battle

I Have To Go With Lm

Cuz He Had Good Vocab Dats It// Work On Yo Struture And Yo Verbz

Mike Work On Yo Pucnhes Man Both Of Yall Need To Work On Punches

Vote=lm

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Mind You This Is An Old Ass Battle So Our Verses Might Be A Lil Wack....

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