Friendly battle...

10 Lines
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Drop in an hour

Good Luck MythikuL

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....Checkin In....
...Lets get this poppin...
We both aint battled in a while
So this should be close

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^^lets hope so cuz...

lol

good luck 2 u

CHECKING IN...

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THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/

FINISHER*

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it)

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THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

on my last line, i d k it fucked up and entered it one more so dont count that against me ....ya ..yall kno

ight

uppin 4 my boyz verse

good luck ill...

u prob dont need it lol

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THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt

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I was just jottin shit...
Nothin speciall.....

UPPIN FOR VOTES
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Illunatic's string of the long e rhyme over like six lines really helped his flow, which, especially when compared to Mythikul's, was pretty good. I can't vote yet, but i would vote for Illunatic.

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DIRTYENDZONE

vote on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280

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DIRTYENDZONE

Punches-I
Flow-I
Structure-I
Finisher-I(neither were too good)
Opener-I
Vocab-I

Mythikul You Have Alot

Sry Fucked Up I Accidentally Sent It

But Mythikul You Need Alot Of Work On Your Rhymes I Can Tell ILL Didnt Try Cuz If He Did You Would Of Got Ripped But Vote ILLunatic

damn myth fix your structure.......
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ill, im seaking to kill,u floppin still,u call u heat but all u send is a chill/
u a rapper ur a face-for-bags,u a mc u trully a disgrace-to-stages/
alright set up ...horrible 2nd line no punch....4/10
this a race-for-ages,u rhymes from a book, just whered u place-the-pages
recycling, your garbage YOU-SPREAD,u spit at me, then y the fuck r YOU-DEAD/
not too bad ... stick to a simpler rhyme scheme this one dont suit you well 5/10
u fall in the polls like "H-DEAN", im a myth but ur SPITs the thing rlly AINT-SEEN/
ILL-in-tear, myth comes hes still-in-fear, like ur reputation, i KILL-n-CLEAR
alright i'll give you 6/10 ...
change-directions,rearrange your-intenstines,u a mc, and ur still ASKING-4-QUESTIONS/
2-wrong, definetly not u thats 2-strong, u think u can beat me wit ur blues-song/
still not werkin for me .... 4/10 ... werk on punches man seriously...
FINISHER*

HEY, UNATIC, call u herb static, way wack sticks-2-u,call u a HO, the way dicks-go-2-u/
comin out of retirment,just 2 cant sent back 2 the WACK-PLACE,ill trace BACK-2-UR-DISGRACE, wit
lines like that, ur the sweet-victory w.o the TRUE-TASTE (think bout it)
ehh.....not feelin it ....poor verse.......i already know you lost your total was like 25 or somethin.....

ILL'S
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Ya flows an embarassment and ya mainly battle newbies
Restricted to MythikuL...wait.. Restricted Who? who's he
structure clearly superior ...good punch ... personal in there...7/10
Unheard of member, who's been registerd since June of 03
Oh G, i basically insult myself when callin you my homie
nother personal punch...nice multi attempt...7/10
You think your 3rd return makes you rememberable to RB
Hardly... even if ya spit razor punches, ya still couldn't harm me
again playin wit a multi ... a punch ..personal again ..8/10
Ya better wish theres life afta death, cuz your death is near
MythikuL stepped in fear, already knowin.... The End Is Here
decent 7/10 ....
Shit betta get Mohammad Ali ta throw ya punches, for help
Flow like a buttafly sting like a bee?? Fuck it.. He's just been delt
okay iguess.....coulda been werded better and its played....6/10

ILL obviously wins....by a very large margin.......
peace

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Can you please add more to your vote..
So it dont get DQ'd............................
I'm sure Axe will be here any second
Disqualifing your vote.......

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punches-ill
vocab-ill
creativity-ill
metaphors-ill
flo-ill
he took it in every category i've seen him spit harder tho

hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...803#post1151803
vote-ill

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IM UNSTOPPABLE
LIKE 50 IM UNPOPPABLE/
ILL PUT MORE WOOD IN YA GIRLS MOUTH THAN A POPSICKLE/

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