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Straight Ace | 5 | 71.43% | |
Freeman | 2 | 28.57% | |
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02-14-04, 11:26 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Freeman Vs Straight Ace
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02-14-04, 11:27 AM | #2 | ||||||
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02-14-04, 11:28 AM | #3 | |||||||
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02-14-04, 11:41 AM | #4 | ||||||
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This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face
Here your out of place... ... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it You can beat newbs but... ... When it comes to me you cant hack it Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you... ... Do to your verse is tamper Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken My advice to you... ... Is go on get help from Token Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit Im the one who made your eyes roll... ... By making my writing minute |
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02-14-04, 12:34 PM | #5 | |||||||
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May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall..
& the win always comes Mi-Wee.. .......Just like the writings.......on his wall... It occured to me, how ur open mic style..looks 'lot like mine.. ...startin with dots & writin in italic.. ...& Free tried to cross it...but kept under lined.. Seeds of doubt.. & Free knows in Fl he's the best.. I'm the gardener... ......Of ur field of dreams & i just cut of ur root to succes.. A cheatin' present O ever so imaginative...But yes true.. "It's nothing very different from any other normal day" ..Exactly....... that's why she's spendin' Valentine's.. .....Far away from you! |
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02-14-04, 01:24 PM | #6 | |||||
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hey i wasnt really impressed with both verses.. i didnt really see those many punchlines or good personals in here
but this is how i see it overall view of battle- freeman.. your verse didnt really have those many punchlines and your wordplay was so so .. however you had disses in your verse that outedged straight aces verse.. i felt like these disses of yours were better than anything that straight ace "You can beat newbs but... ... When it comes to me you cant hack it" also this line was ok ---------> "Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken My advice to you... ... Is go on get help from Token" now straight ace i didnt really like your verse.. i felt like alot of your personals didnt hit hard lines like this were weak to me --------------> "May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall.. & the win always comes Mi-Wee.. .......Just like the writings.......on his wall..." your personals lacked any intesity and i didnt realyl see any punchlines at all in your verse.. shit was kind of weak to me VOTE: freeman.. i vote for freeman on this basically because he had the better disses and wordplay in this battle
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02-14-04, 01:31 PM | #7 | |||||
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This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face Here your out of place... ... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace wack.. played.. everyone uses card jokes and there old now Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it You can beat newbs but... ... When it comes to me you cant hack it played... not a good punch Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you... ... Do to your verse is tamper nice punch.. personal made it good Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken My advice to you... ... Is go on get help from Token wack.. no punch at all Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit Im the one who made your eyes roll... ... By making my writing minute meh.. just an ok ending Ace May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall.. & the win always comes Mi-Wee.. .......Just like the writings.......on his wall... lol.. dope punch..nice opening wit the personal It occured to me, how ur open mic style..looks 'lot like mine.. ...startin with dots & writin in italic.. ...& Free tried to cross it...but kept under lined.. creative... not really a punch though Seeds of doubt.. & Free knows in Fl he's the best.. I'm the gardener... ......Of ur field of dreams & i just cut of ur root to succes.. good punch.. A cheatin' present O ever so imaginative...But yes true.. "It's nothing very different from any other normal day" ..Exactly....... that's why she's spendin' Valentine's.. .....Far away from you! lol.. dope ass closer wit a personal..nice overall - Straight ace came packed wit good personals and nice creative punches.. free's verse didnt have as many good punches and he had some played personals.. he did have one nice though, but not nearly as close in dopeness to Aces V/ Ace took this wit harder personal punches
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02-14-04, 01:38 PM | #8 | ||||
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freeman
This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face Here your out of place... ... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace could of been worded better, pretty good, 7/10 Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it You can beat newbs but... ... When it comes to me you cant hack it second line was nice first, not to good, 6/10 Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you... ... Do to your verse is tamper too many card jokes, not a very good punch n e way, 5/10 Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken My advice to you... ... Is go on get help from Token i didnt like the set up, but second line was nice, 6/10 Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit Im the one who made your eyes roll... ... By making my writing minute u using both, cards in ur verse an his avy, 5/10 you verse seemed to be basing your punches on two points, cads an his avy, o it was like you was repeating yourslef, but flipping, your punches, which took away the origionality towards the end!! overall 29/50 straight ace May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall.. & the win always comes Mi-Wee.. .......Just like the writings.......on his wall... nice wordplay, ot very direct, 6/10 It occured to me, how ur open mic style..looks 'lot like mine.. ...startin with dots & writin in italic.. ...& Free tried to cross it...but kept under lined.. nice personal, 7/10 Seeds of doubt.. & Free knows in Fl he's the best.. I'm the gardener... ......Of ur field of dreams & i just cut of ur root to succes.. very creative, 6/10 A cheatin' present O ever so imaginative...But yes true.. "It's nothing very different from any other normal day" ..Exactly....... that's why she's spendin' Valentine's.. .....Far away from you! a good personal, an nice punch, 16/20 overall 35/50 the fact that freeman used the same concepts in his verse proabably lost this battle!!
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02-14-04, 03:39 PM | #9 | |||||||
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freeman-good punches and lots of personals...
the line about token was nice... you had lots of hard hittin personals in this and good wordplay... ace-good personals also... but your punches were well... a little weak and not worded as good as thye couldve been worded... you also had a nice vers ebut not good enuff... My V/Freeman...Return the favor wit honest votes on my Topical with Rule in Elevated frontlines and my Topical wit diverse... <link my sig in frontlines
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02-14-04, 03:48 PM | #10 | ||||
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V/ Ace, his punches connected better. & were in my opinion more creativer, .. I enjoyed them, ..freeman had a average verse w/ average punches.. both need to take it up the next level.. =) V/Ace.
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02-14-04, 03:50 PM | #11 | |||||||
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02-14-04, 03:56 PM | #12 | ||||
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freeman your verse ddint really have any punches if you ask me the wording was kinda off in some place...some of the concepts could have been truned into punches..and your verse wuold have been a hell of a lot better your opener was mad played..the tamper line was the only one i kind of liked the rest was blah. just being honest.. ace came les played and a hell of a lot more consistent... his punches didnt hit that hard either but i was feelin his verse more than freemans verse the root to your success line was your best....opener wasnt bad either thats my vote out |
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02-14-04, 07:02 PM | #13 | ||||
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ace had harder hitting punches....not much but enough to beat this battle..both came pretty weak seems to me..ace coulda came much harder then he did..and Free was just ehh........seems like this wasnt really a stand out battle from either..did u even try?....well anyway ace had that nice root line..an fre cam with way to many played conceptz....so...therefore..
v/ace
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