If ya speak the truth and cause pain… it that honesty?
It’s insane and prob’ly should be with held periodically
But it’s a commodity interpreted by the eye of the beholder
And commonly misused to amuse… by that controller
So don’t be confused cos not all truths are true
And a few, started off, but grew through beyond to… lies
Comprised by you… the anonymous faces only recognised
When it’s realised, when the damage is done… don’t ya hear the cries
Of the compromised… of the victim that fell to ya system
Why?… shouldn’t you tell what makes em happiest living?
Cos Giving bad news isn’t a virtue that I partake willin
It’s a tough decision that some times proves to be wrong
Cos an acknowledgement can be enough to switch on the alarm
Therefore a lie can be right… if it is gonna cause less harm
A door to the light without insight, blind but remaining calm
Without a Qualm or problem… now tell me that aint honest
It’s just a different perspective to solve them… I promise
Whether novice or pro there’s one thing I know… an open mind
And that a definition of this word cant be heard or defined
Well I don’t think so… in my world its whatever suites the time

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whats with the sleepin'z

Aight, first of all, i really loved the flow on this, the rhyming was awesome, cause it's rhymed basically throughout the whole thing. It's like you tried to rhyme every word so that's cool. The vocab was really good. Structure was also good...i can't seem to find anything wrong with this....wish it was longer though....
keep droppin

peace

thnx man.... atleast some people aint sleeping,,,,,lol.....

Nice Flow. Decent Piece..I've seen better from you, but Im not complaining. This was well done, Flowing to A T, good vocabulary, basically, an overall good presence of Vocabulary and nice imagery. I liked to read it, but I felt something was missing from this piece. Good dope Job, but maybe I lost feeling of Writers Voice or whatnot.

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nice work...and that's alll I'm saying...Freepost~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~LOl...no this was nice..your vocab was great,and I really liked the content..keep up the good work...peace...

thx FAG!.......lmao

Wow..........

Only cause u asked it nice..

*Hit*

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This was ok, man .. ur vocab was good, flow & content enjoyed me, just lose tha ya & all , the slang in it ,.. it destroyes your piece, but all & all this was nice man.. keep dropping& suprise me more.. ..= )

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Yo Dev that was ill man.....No doubt, your vocab was real good as well as the flow. The content was cool as well......yea man i understand people be sleepin on Open Mic an good shit like this gets passed up......Well worth the read......

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I really enjoyed this peice...i was really feelin the vocab...
scheme and content...the structure was good too...

favorite line...

"Whether novice or pro there’s one thing I know… an open mind
And that a definition of this word cant be heard or defined"...

Good Work...Keep Spittin...

I really enjoyed this peice...i was really feelin the vocab...
scheme and content...the structure was good too...

favorite line...

"Whether novice or pro there’s one thing I know… an open mind
And that a definition of this word cant be heard or defined"...

Good Work...Keep Spittin...

Return the favor...check the battles in my sig...
we need votes we gettin slept on hard...