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02-04-04, 09:36 AM
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Intro
IP: 7796 EF32
Yo, alrite.. Relax sip up n belt the fuck up... CUZ.....
My name is proclaimed to be a bit of a diffrence... im taking every battle in set's from illness deliverence... im the ignorance of my time, the founder of this community... im known to have cells, stretched longer than humanity... it's a race of sanity, a race of time..... my lines produce ink thats stronger than vinegar n lime... my rhyme folds back, n makes eyes roll up... i spit lines of fire, that makes ya cheeks burn up... corrupted or interupted, maybe just miss-interpeted... im the profit with a vision that is real and positive... no negative vibe gets inside this station... now listen cos i've arrived this is an invasion...  Theres no fuckin invitation, when im cruising up in VIP... yo'w ass is probably suffering from STI, or betta yet HIV... you need to take yourself to a clinic n get a check -U-P! cos theres no way im hitting pussy, thats fuckin nasty n dirty... im not for the gritty n slime.... the un-hygienic and smelly ass crack line... im here for the G'z and the mad respect ya give.... yea im destinated in th UK, where the fuck do you LIVE? no i'm not interested in the GAYS, thats your role KID... Fuck tryna express my real ambitions... my track record may not respect me, but i make my own fuckin desicions...
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02-04-04, 10:38 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
you had a decent flow in the beginning and it kind of fell off...your content was weak but I guess this being your intro and all,it's exceptable...good luck ~~~~Click my sig and peep my OM's~~~
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02-04-04, 10:46 AM
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IP: 40D6 EBC3
Sigh...
Another self-glorification verse... A find these verses false... None of it is true... Write about a topic that you can tell the truth about... You started with a decent flow in the beginning... Then fell off as the verse progressed... Seemed abit forced at times... Structure was abit wierd aswell... Not bad... But you have potential to improve... Pz |
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02-04-04, 06:11 PM
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IP: 072B 152E
well no1 wud have met me my name s stu
there are a number of things which now i can do these raps will come at u left right and centre it wud b damn hard for u to find sum1 better u may havv noticed i havent battled yet but when i do, watch how many wins i will get c u may think im confident, others say cocky well im not gona go off the fact that im lucky |
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