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illtalic 1 16.67%
W1CKED 5 83.33%
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Old 02-01-04, 10:05 AM   #1
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W1CKED vs illtalic

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You know the rules.
Consider this my check in.
Good luck, homie.

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Old 02-01-04, 10:06 AM   #2
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No poll? Any particular reason?

Check in..
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Old 02-01-04, 10:12 AM   #3
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Ummm...
This is polled...

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Old 02-01-04, 10:24 AM   #4
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Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
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Old 02-01-04, 10:26 AM   #5
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*his sig says “Comedic writer”
**Look at his costom title

Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !

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Old 02-01-04, 06:27 PM   #6
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Old 02-01-04, 06:44 PM   #7
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i will edit in a vote....

but untill then you forgot to poll on mine Wicked
 
Old 02-02-04, 12:56 AM   #8
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Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
aight...solid punch...7/10

Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
hmmm..didnt like this...worded bad...3/10

A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
ok..not too much..6/10

Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
not really a punch..pretty weak...3/10

With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
shoulda come much harder for the closer...3/10

overall ...for illtalic....22/50....44%



Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
coo punch....liked this...8/10

This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
weak...3/10

My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
played concept...average...5/10

Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
nice personal....8/10

Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
lmao!!....8/10

I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
like the wordplay....8/10..strong final lines...

overall for wicked...40/60...wicked wins....



please vote here....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110950

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wtf?? i cant do it by breakind down bars??.......thats weak..

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Old 02-02-04, 01:14 AM   #9
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111506

help a nigg out and vote on this battle, ill return the favor peace
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Old 02-02-04, 06:05 AM   #10
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^ No..

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Old 02-02-04, 06:34 AM   #11
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iight...

illtalic

Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Hmm... not bad really... 6/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
haha... nice one... hit hard... 8/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Hmm... wasnt feelin this line... 5/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
dope... 9/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
not a bad closer... 7/10

overall... 35/50... decent verse flow was off at one point but you got it back... structure was decent... good... keep it up... pz

W1CKED

Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
very nice opener there... good... 8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
hmm... concept wasnt that good... a didnt like it neway... didnt really hit... 5/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
maybe its the way that a pronounce 'folk'... but it dont sound like window... but the last line of this bar was decent... played... but decent... 6/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Hmm... played out gun lines... but t was a decent bar... decent personal... 7/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
flow was terrible in this bar... a didnt like it neway... lol... 5/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
decent closer... 6/10

overall... 37/60... not a bad verse... had some good personals in there... keep it up... pz


v/ illtalic...

honestly thought he took this... on the points^... and as his verse was more consistant... ive broke it down and the points were about even... even thought an extra bar was dropped by W1CKED... pz


OUT

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Old 02-02-04, 12:13 PM   #12
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Lets get some honest votes in here...

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Old 02-02-04, 12:53 PM   #13
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V/ Wicked, .. due having harder punches and a more enjoyabler verse, italic came iite, .. but he had some fillers in my opinion , .. wicked had a straight verse, .. & took this due punches..
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Old 02-02-04, 01:04 PM   #14
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v/ w1cked...

His punches were stronger and he hit harder with personals....illtalic had too many fillers and lacked the creativity which w1cked had.


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Old 02-02-04, 07:26 PM   #15
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